Safe Refuge for the Exile, Part 1: Cop, Interrupted

[never_moor]

Nevermoor: Safe Refuge For the Exile

1: Cop, Interrupted

Comments

[eviinsanemonkey]

This is way, way cool. I love the voice and the interludes and I am definitely intrigued. :)

[never_moor]

Yay! Thank you very much for reading and commenting!

[jaxomsride]

A good start!
Will eagerly await the next chapter.

[never_moor]

Thanks very much for reading and commenting!

[vilakins]

I like it, and him!

Is this the part of the country you live in? Ah well, he'll probably have some Somerville-type murders to make up for it. :-)

[never_moor]

Yay! Thanks for reading :)

It's loosely based on where I live, yeah. Good catharsis :D

[lelek]

I like this a lot! I've always thought about doing a serial novel like this, to try to motivate me to actually finish an original project - maybe you'll finally inspire me to do it.

Regardless, this is a great start and I will definitely be reading!

[never_moor]

Thanks very much for reading and commenting! Good luck if you decide to write something - looking forward to reading it if you do :)

[jessicareloaded]

I know I'm late to the party, but I really enjoyed this! I like the switch between the first person and third person, it works really well here. I'm going to go get caught up on the rest of the story now.

[never_moor]

Thank you very much! :) Hope you like the rest of it!