Comments | nevcolleil: Fic: but business is business - Supernatural/Inception, John + Dom (Dom/Dean), PG-13

nevcolleil

Fic: but business is business - Supernatural/Inception, John + Dom (Dom/Dean), PG-13

Jun 13, 2011 17:53

Title: but business is business
Fandom(s): Supernatural/Inception
Pairing: Dom Cobb/Dean Winchester
Rating: PG-13
Author's Note: For this prompt at comment_fic: John and Dom both have allergies to incompetence. I suppose I took some license with my response to it.
Summary: By the time he gets it, John has come to expect the call.

( and business runs in the family )

fic: crossover: spn/inception, pg-13, fic: crossover, slash, fic: spn, fic: inception, comment fic: jun 11, dean/dom

Comments 16

hawk_dancing June 13 2011, 23:21:54 UTC

I love this. John's (Dom and Arthur's) reactions are perfect

nevcolleil June 14 2011, 01:09:10 UTC

Thank you :D

rednihilist June 13 2011, 23:37:32 UTC

Oh, this is perfect, completely out of left field but mindbogglingly perfect -- not least because of the corresponding mental image of Dean and Dom together. :) RAWR! You've done an exquisite job with the tone here. It's practical, as it should be with John as the narrator, but it's also easy to read the emotion and feeling here, and that's something not a lot of people writing from John's POV seem to get across (IMHO, anyway).

I would so love to see more of this (*nudges*), but what a truly amazing story you've got here. Congrats, hon, on a job well done!!!

nevcolleil June 14 2011, 01:10:37 UTC

Thank you so much for such nice comments :D I'd love to write more, so we'll see what happens. I'm glad I did okay with John's POV - I'm especially pleased that you enjoyed it.

tigriswolf June 14 2011, 01:34:49 UTC

Oh, yes, papawolf!John.

This is pretty awesome; I hope your muse decides to give us more.

Also, this:

“What are your plans?”

Dom blinks. Arthur looks at John. They’re both obviously surprised that John is being as calm as he is about this. They don’t know him well enough to know that he’s just saving himself for Sydney.

“Short answer?” Dom says, completely serious. He doesn’t smile as he points to the frozen computer screen and says, “We kill them all.” He breathes out a puff of smoke and asks, “Or do you want details?”

Details can wait til after they’ve picked up Sammy.

“Nah, that’ll do.”

totally made the fic. *glee*

nevcolleil June 14 2011, 01:59:51 UTC

I'm really glad you enjoyed this :D I want to write Eames talking Dean and Arthur into some sort of shenanigan and Dom and Eames bumping heads because Eames endangered both Dom's best friend and his boyfriend at the same time :p

tigriswolf June 14 2011, 02:06:47 UTC

Oh, yes, write write WRITE!

ammcj062 June 14 2011, 02:11:08 UTC

Whoever has Dean had better start running!

Great story - you've managed to pack an entire world into this little fic, with wonderfully vivid imagery.

nevcolleil June 14 2011, 03:01:23 UTC

Thank you :D Glad you like it!

Snippets like this are brilliant. ofvanity June 14 2011, 03:38:58 UTC

It's like you're showing us just part of the ride, a crucial part, but just a small portion of the entire thing and that's just brilliant all on it's own. But it's like you're showing on a piece, but presenting the before and the insinuating the after in a perfect way. There's no question that John and Dom's meeting was shaky, and that after this, it will be less so. And two completely different 'verses just slide into each other with a little wiggle room.

Also I totally believe that Cobb/Dean would happen. Just believable. I don't know how you do it, but you do.

In short: AWESOMEEEE.

Re: Snippets like this are brilliant. nevcolleil June 14 2011, 15:29:38 UTC

Thanks for making such nice comments :D I always hope that that's how my fics will feel - like a glimpse into the world I'd like to write on at length but never really can :p I'm really glad this works for you :) Your review really started my morning off with a smile!