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nevcolleil

Cards Speak - MR/JA RPS - PG13 Drabble

Dec 22, 2008 17:50

Title: Cards Speak
Author: nevcolleil
Disclaimer: I'm sure nothing in this even slightly resembles reality. (Goddamned reality!)
Pairing: Michael Rosenbaum/Jensen Ackles RPS
Rating: PG13
Word Count: 400words
Summary: For the 'Old Challenges Revisited' challenge on at slashthedrabble. Prompt #: Chance.

( Jensen was too preoccupied with Mike's hand to concentrate on his own. )

baum the beloved, slash, rps, fic: rps, fic talk, slashthedrabble, jen/mike, it all comes back to the ackles

Comments 8

sylvertwisted December 23 2008, 04:40:58 UTC

Awe :) I like it. Nicely done *thumbs up*

nevcolleil March 8 2009, 14:31:58 UTC

Ooh - delayed reaction, I know, but thank you for commenting on this :)

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nevcolleil March 8 2009, 14:32:27 UTC

Thanks for reading :D I crave Jensen/Michael. There's just not enough of it.

laisserais December 24 2008, 02:29:24 UTC

both versions of this were lovely, although i think i like the second one best, it seems to carry the metaphor farther. but i love the idea of jensen surprising himself, and i love your characterization of mike. it seems subtle and real. :)

nevcolleil March 8 2009, 14:33:19 UTC

Thank you so much :D Characterization is one of my biggest concerns, so I'm glad you think Mike's works in these.

roxymissrose December 24 2008, 02:58:32 UTC

You've made me an incredibly happy woman--and I adore the second part. It's nice to read Michael being a *good* guy, not just a goofball.

nevcolleil March 8 2009, 14:35:40 UTC

I know this is a late reply, but thank you for your nice comments :D There so needs to be more Mike rps. More Mike anything :p I hope he lands a new project soon - I'm going into Rosenbaum withdrawal!

scorp76 April 4 2009, 10:47:21 UTC

Excellent work! Totally enjoyed, both versions had their unique elements that appealed.
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