Comments | neurotoxic: #TEN ELEGY {<strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/18Coda">18Coda</a></strong>}

neurotoxic

#TEN ELEGY {18Coda}

Mar 05, 2008 16:06

Title: Entombed
Author: neurotoxic
Theme: Elegy
Fandom: Death Note
Characters: Near-centric (with mentions of Mello).
Warnings: n/a
Disclaimer: I don't own Death Note. Not just as planned.
Summary/Comments: He's not a person anymore, not really.

( This one world vision turns us in to compromise, what good's religion when it's each other we despise? )

18coda, mello, near, death note fic

Comments 12

istne_pieklo March 6 2008, 19:54:08 UTC

*sniff* That is so sad and extremely heartbreakingly beautiful!

neurotoxic March 6 2008, 21:14:27 UTC

Aw~ Thanks. ♥ Mello and Near are so integral to each other's characters that it hurts.

norrell March 6 2008, 21:31:21 UTC

It's like his body has become Mello's tomb, an elegy composed of flesh and blood.

I'm going to cry now. Adding to memories.

neurotoxic March 7 2008, 05:56:06 UTC

Thanks for reading~ (:

kurosaki_akane March 14 2008, 00:36:22 UTC

A friend gave me this link today, and I must leave a comment about it, because this is AMAZING. Purely amazing.
You have described the Near I have inside my mind, I find this piece so perfect!!

neurotoxic March 16 2008, 05:52:24 UTC

I'm glad that you like it. (: This was my first attempt at writing something Near-centric, so that means a lot.

nami_assasin March 17 2008, 20:35:41 UTC

Whaaaa I found this randomly but I had to comment *.*

It's so nice (*O*) And I really like how you simple make the viewers understand how Near misses Mello ;___________;

neurotoxic March 26 2008, 08:45:38 UTC

And your comment is appreciated! I was going for a straight-forward drabble, so I'm pleased that you decided to bring that up. Both Mello and Near have the ability to be so complex and yet are relatively simple at the same time. Their relationship is one of my favorites. :3

neurotoxic March 26 2008, 08:47:06 UTC

Also, I apologize for the lateness of my reply. \o/

zeda_chan March 19 2008, 00:03:45 UTC

Even though this is a very short little vignette, I think that it's very effective in elliciting an emotional response. I love that it conveys a feeling of desolate, antiseptic blandness that seems real and believable. I always thought that Near would have to be very lonely at the end of DN, all by himself like that- it's sad, but seems really right to me overall. Realy well-written there, please do write more-!!

neurotoxic March 26 2008, 09:32:56 UTC

I'm glad that the image I wanted to portray was successful. Near's just one of those people who's never destined to be happy, he lost everything before he gained the title of L, it's almost like it was an empty accomplishment. Or at least, I've always seen it that way.

Thanks for reading~ ♥ And I apologize for the delay of this response, I've been bogged down with work.