FIC: Schrodinger's Cat (Heroes, Peter/Claire)

[nessataleweaver]

I still can't believe I got to write a fic for one of my fave authors! Just hope she likes it

Comments

[scullymulder123]

You? Are most certainly love. Because what was AMAZING. The whole entire scenario was just so vivid, realistic, and was so incredibly wonderful.

Heidi and Claire's bond was just so very much adorable; I could feel Claire's angst like she was standing next to me. (And that goes for Heidi's protection over her.)

And Peter? I love the way you wrote him...in fact, I love the way you wrote everyone. :D And the flow of this piece...brilliant. And the plot? Genius.

AmazingWonderfulFantastic job! I absolutely LOVED this story. I can't wait to read more by you.

[obisgirl]

that was a very sexy paire. VERY SEXY. Lol.

[nessataleweaver]

Glad you liked it *g* I originally intended for full-blown NC17, but the story didn't like it, it wouldn't flow properly.

Funny how I'm not having that problem with the fics I'm working on now.

[nessataleweaver]

(to scullymulder123)

Oh, I'm glad the relationship between Heidi and Claire came across as convincing. We haven't seen much of Heidi, and I wanted her to be IC.

So many nice things in one review! Please come back and do my forthcoming stories as well?

[lillaluv]

Wow, just wow!!

This fic was lovely. The characterization was bang on for everyone. I especially liked the bond between Heidi and Claire. Surprising but true, once in awhile your stepmom is the easiest person to talk to.

Fantastic fic for a first timer. Can't wait to read more of your stuff!

[nessataleweaver]

Thanks! Glad to hear the Heidi/Claire bond rang true. As for more of my stuff... watch this space!

[leannethorpe]

awesome little fic there.
i think this should happen in the show :D

[fantasticangel]

Excellent story! I hope to read more of your work in this fandom soon, especially since I've been in a Heroes mood lately.

[nessataleweaver]

Thank you! And yes, more Heroes fic is coming - just got to apply my seat to the seat at the computer, if you know what I mean.

May I say? I love your icon! There aren't enough Jimmy/Lou shippers in the Young Riders fandom - I didn't truly realize what a cool couple they were until a couple of years after the series ended - so of course all the eps I had floating around on tape had nothing about them!

[fantasticangel]

Thank you, I got the 1st season on dvd and have been working on icons. I'm up to episode 8 (It's been about a month since I made any, like I said I'm on a heroes kick, I haven't been in a mood to do Young Riders lately) Anyway there are a few other Jimmy/Lou ones if you were looking.

[biases]

A very nice take on the dilemma presented to us by canon. Awesome work and I liked seeing Heidi have such a prominent position in the fic.

Well done, going into the mems. :)