Fic Diary of an Innocent Girl

[nessa5]

Written for beginnings
Title: Diary of an Innocent Girl
Written by: Kelli/Nessa5
Word Count 488
Beginnings #58, It was love at first sight.
Time: about two hours, after thinking about it over night.
Rated: PG to be safe
Notes: This is a side story to the Blood Servants stories found in my LJ
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also used for 100_prompts Prompt #50, Played for a Fool

Comments

[story_hunter]

Bless, so sweet & innocent! So easy... ;-)

Bizarrely my first instinct for this challenge was to write a vampire story too, but i changed my mind when I started writing it.

[nessa5]

thank you

this one fits among my ongoing vampire stories

[chainedinbeads]

My vamp boys are very disappointed that one of their kind could treat anyone this way.

Lovely flow and buildup to the climax. I'd love to know what happens after she takes the pills - whether she truly dies or ends up turned. Just because I'm nosey that way. *G*

[nessa5]

Lol, Thanks for commenting.
I'll have to go check out your boys.
:)

My vamps are not always good guys. In my stories to be bitten means the turning is started, it can not be completed without a blood exchange. Not wanting every snack to be turned the vamps have kill off the victim before they suffer too much from starvation. Theres more here
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