SPM Ficlet: Have You Ever Seen The Rain

[nescienx]

Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Harry/Peter
Notes: Forgive for silly mistakes, if there are any. Started off as an answer to a challenge in spideyslash (theme: rain and/or marking). Don't know if I should submit there, but here it is, on my LJ first.
Revised: 17 Aug 2004
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Comments

... ^__^

[mayuki_miyazawa]

i dunno who you are, and i'm not sure i know who i am either...
but YOUR FICLET TOTALLY KICKS ASS!!!

WOOOOOOT HARRY+PETER FOREVER *DANCES*
T__T omg sorry im just a crazy slash fan.
;_; damnit they're sxc lidool mofoz.
:D KEEP WRITING!

Hello~

[nescienx]

*waves*

You're from suanime, right?

Thanks for the comments~ :D

[aefallen]

*is in pain* "Don't hurt Peter -"

(Want it beta-read? *grin*)

(I've discovered why I'm taking so long with beta-ing your other fic. I've waited for it so long and I love it so much that I'm having an accursed time finding its flaws)

(guess who walked past my desk again)

Don't know if I should submit there, but here it is

YES YOU SHOULD.

[nescienx]

You mean there're glaring mistakes in the story? ~_~ I don't want it beta-read, but if there are really bad grammar errors, let me know.

[aefallen]

Then just this one:

There is hurt in Harry's eyes. He can see the pain on his face as it hovers above his.

With the second sentence, the use of "his" or related words three times - I can't tell who the "he" is. Maybe use a name somewhere in there, at least once?

[nescienx]

Ah, thanks. <3

[aefallen]

That was one ending I didn't expect.

(That's a good thing!)

[nescienx]

^_^ Really?

[aefallen]

*grin* Do I need a reason to leave you comments, just because?

[nescienx]

New icon, I see.

[aefallen]

*cries* BABY. You see right through me.

(New icon'd give you something to look at, beside my ceaseless fangirling? XD )

[nescienx]

Heh.

I wish I had more iconspace. =\ Can't bear to delete those you've made.

*whimper*

[aefallen]

Remember... Lycan! Tobey...

He is giving me trouble. He is giving me so much trouble it's turned into a backstory starting from the 11th century, beginning with the Crusades all the way up til World War II. That's... the 11th century to the 20th, Tobey! I can't do this!

And today at a client lunch, to my intense horror, I began to think that he and Jonathan Rhys-Meyers would look very pretty together.

Also I wanted to text-message spam you this morning, only I realized it wouldn't be morning for you, so I was all *sobs*.

Am out with friends for dinner tonight and didn't bring Paris along, so no Internet for me save what I get from work... *clings to*

But work ends next Friday, which means that I shall be regularly at wireless-enabled places. like everyday free.

I miss you. *cries*