I wanna leave a coherent comment but possibly the best compliment I could give you is that I was horribly jealous of most of your descriptions and narration. It isn't very conducive to me writing my next fic, lol!
I'm thinking I need to find a "Thesaurus for Porn Writers" - how many ways are there to say suck, dick, hard and slick? It could be a good money maker in fandom. :)
LMAO. I know THAT feeling! Yeah, but you did really well though. Certain repetitions make sense. Others just sound redundant. And you hit just the right balance.
It's the filthiest thing I've ever written, and I'm kinda proud of that. :)
I'm happy you liked it, even with the weird mix of rough and schmoop. I can't write anything without at least a little bit of schmoop. It's a thing. :P
I'm kind of in love with this fic. It's damn near perfect, characterization, style, god, just everything. LOVE. IT. (this is starting to be my canon, too, that they didn't fuck during S4, but are coming back together now, in their own unique Winchester way)
A few of my favorite things: ...and Dean throws a hard right hook to his jaw, teeth ripping into his cheek like the meat it is, cut and bloody. It doesn’t taste anything like demon blood, and the thought is a horrible relief, from what he’s done and what he was worried he might be
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(this is starting to be my canon, too, that they didn't fuck during S4, but are coming back together now, in their own unique Winchester way)
*nods* It's just... I can't see a non-AU season 4 where they're together. For a lot of reasons, but the one at the forefront of my mind is that it fucks with the OTP - I don't like the idea of Sam fucking someone else at the same time he's fucking Dean, and I don't like the idea of sex between them being based on hate or anger or anything but their freaking epic love.
I am THRILLED you liked this - as I once said, I believe monks should hike up snow covered mountains to learn your porn-fu craft, so your comments are high praise indeed. :)
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HELLO YES SWEET AND LOVELY FIC OF PERFECTION AND HOTNESS. DON'T EVER DIE.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it. ;)
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I'm thinking I need to find a "Thesaurus for Porn Writers" - how many ways are there to say suck, dick, hard and slick? It could be a good money maker in fandom. :)
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I'm happy you liked it, even with the weird mix of rough and schmoop. I can't write anything without at least a little bit of schmoop. It's a thing. :P
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A few of my favorite things:
...and Dean throws a hard right hook to his jaw, teeth ripping into his cheek like the meat it is, cut and bloody. It doesn’t taste anything like demon blood, and the thought is a horrible relief, from what he’s done and what he was worried he might be ( ... )
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*nods* It's just... I can't see a non-AU season 4 where they're together. For a lot of reasons, but the one at the forefront of my mind is that it fucks with the OTP - I don't like the idea of Sam fucking someone else at the same time he's fucking Dean, and I don't like the idea of sex between them being based on hate or anger or anything but their freaking epic love.
I am THRILLED you liked this - as I once said, I believe monks should hike up snow covered mountains to learn your porn-fu craft, so your comments are high praise indeed. :)
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