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FIC: March Madness

Mar 14, 2012 01:29

Title: March Madness
Author: neros_violin
Pairing: Jared/Jensen
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 3,350
Summary: Jared has the best ideas. Beer, basketball, and sweaty boys.
Author's Notes: Written for the Spring 2012 silverbullets challenge, for girlguidejones's prompt March madness. Set in that wonderful, magical time when Jared and Jensen were living together and fucking.
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fic, challenges, j2

Comments 97

mandatorily March 14 2012, 08:56:48 UTC

Oh, sweet baby Jesus in the Manger, holy fucking fuck a fuckity duck. GOD ALMIGHTY. I'm dead. I can't even speak. My brain's just going, "Humina, humina, humina . . . "

neros_violin March 14 2012, 17:46:47 UTC

LOL! holy fucking fuck a fuckity duck may be the best comment ever. Glad you enjoyed it!

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neros_violin March 14 2012, 19:46:50 UTC

<3333 you so much, bb. I didn't intend for there to be so much porn, it just happened! But I'm very pleased you liked it. ;) SCHMOOOOP FTW!

dev_earl March 14 2012, 11:21:33 UTC

Simply DELICIOUS. I love the exchange before the kiss: PERFECTION. ♥

neros_violin March 14 2012, 19:47:11 UTC

Thank you, my dear! And because I suck at birthdays, HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY!!! <3

dev_earl March 15 2012, 10:06:50 UTC

D'aww. Thank you! :)

riyku March 14 2012, 12:24:20 UTC

This is just wonderful--I found myself all aflutter with the details of it: Dorito dust and beer at 10 because it's noon in Texas and Jensen's white knuckles. Allow me to second the above comments. The dialogue right before they kissed was fantastic, realistic and awkward and made my stomach do that little swooping thing. Also, sexy hot. How did you manage this in a 24 hour timeframe? How are you so awesome?

neros_violin March 14 2012, 19:49:35 UTC

Swoopy stomach, yay! :D TBH, there was A TON of stuff that I wanted to put in but couldn't (24 hours, that were really more like 16 hours because I didn't check my email until 9 am, that were really like 10 hours because I also had to do SOME work yesterday), so I ended up with a bit more telling and a bit less showing than I would have liked. But I'm thrilled by your comments, and that you had a good time reading it. :D Can't wait to see what you come up with!

zoemathemata March 14 2012, 12:38:22 UTC

I LOVED IT WHEN YOU PUT IN JENSEN WEARING GLASSES.

*um, did I yell that?* sorry.

SO awesome. So hot and full of so much goodness!

the guilt was almost worth the orgasms
loved that line. Must be the catholic girl in me!

neros_violin March 14 2012, 19:51:19 UTC

I was thinking of you when I did it, bb. ;) And also, I miss the glasses!

Guilt is especially enticing with sex... but y'all Catholics already know that. :P

Thanks for the cheerleading! <3