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azra_il October 14 2005, 13:22:46 UTC
Hey, it's LycanthropE and not Lycanthropy :\

And yeah, this part, "..he was knocked back a good distance and once again, fell painfully on his back. Painfully getting back up, he saw Syllabear rise up to its hind legs.." and this ".. as he crashed into the brown bear sending it crashing into the ground.." are kinda redundant.

But's bloody good, literally, and I still like it.

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neridas October 14 2005, 15:37:14 UTC
sorry na, uber lang po... pati vocab ko uber :(

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azra_il October 16 2005, 13:32:18 UTC
Ohh I like the new title better.

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kingarthas October 15 2005, 04:39:17 UTC
loooooooooool. porma tlga ng lycan eh. bangis eh. katulad mo. looooooooooooooooooooooooooooool.

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twelve25 October 15 2005, 04:40:09 UTC
uh...huh. wala bang good ending? like prolly Slardar marrying the naga siren? your stories are getting predictable. or like drinking spree nina pandaren and syllabear? or maybe reunion nina pugna, clinx leoric at lich - the skeleton squad.. :p

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neridas October 15 2005, 06:05:40 UTC
ASA gago, character battles nga e

pero now and then magkakaroon ng tadong stories and 2v2s :D

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