And yeah, this part, "..he was knocked back a good distance and once again, fell painfully on his back. Painfully getting back up, he saw Syllabear rise up to its hind legs.." and this ".. as he crashed into the brown bear sending it crashing into the ground.." are kinda redundant.
But's bloody good, literally, and I still like it.
uh...huh. wala bang good ending? like prolly Slardar marrying the naga siren? your stories are getting predictable. or like drinking spree nina pandaren and syllabear? or maybe reunion nina pugna, clinx leoric at lich - the skeleton squad.. :p
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And yeah, this part, "..he was knocked back a good distance and once again, fell painfully on his back. Painfully getting back up, he saw Syllabear rise up to its hind legs.." and this ".. as he crashed into the brown bear sending it crashing into the ground.." are kinda redundant.
But's bloody good, literally, and I still like it.
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pero now and then magkakaroon ng tadong stories and 2v2s :D
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