Comments | nerd_san: Phosphorescent Lights: Chapter 15 [3]

nerd_san

Phosphorescent Lights: Chapter 15 [3]

Mar 19, 2009 15:31

Every secret has a price…
Title: Phosphorescent Lights
Summary: A photographer with no memories whose goal in life is to seek out what he has lost; a businessman who swore revenge for the death of his lover while desperately trying to escape his fixated reality. Two entirely different men with entirely different lives bound together by the threads ( Read more... )

[pairing] jinda, [pairing] akame, [pairing] ryopi, [genre] romance, [pairing] pin, [length] multichapter, [fic] phosphorescent lights, [genre] drama, [pairing] ryoda, [pairing] kamaki, [pairing] kokame

Comments 115

isuk18 March 19 2009, 20:46:31 UTC

FIRST!!!!

isuk18 March 19 2009, 21:01:37 UTC

That's what I get for checking my f-page at the perfect time XDDDD And I was just thinking today 'Hmm, when will Kari-chan update?' and BAM!!!! A 3 parts chapter *dead ( ... )

nerd_san March 19 2009, 21:12:05 UTC

Hehehe long comment *happiness alert* I wanted to update at like..5:00am but but but part [3] was written entirely in first person (Jin's view) so it took forever to change it to third person D: lol ( ... )

isuk18 March 19 2009, 21:20:45 UTC

ONE MORE CHAPTER LEFT????????????????? O_O OMG!!!!!!! *flails & dies*

..... I usually encourage studying but my heart just won't let me encourage math .... ummm, but it's still studying but it's math XDDDD I'll just say this: GAMBATTEEE!!!!! ♥

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blue_eye1 March 19 2009, 21:55:27 UTC

Believe me or not but I've read this part twice ^_^
And I just love it so much. It's good to read something like this after what happened in the last chapter.

It was like deja vu only this time Kame is the chasing one ^_^ and again I head real fun reading it ^^

I must say that the way you choose for Kame to remember everything is wonderful.
The comfortableness he felt around Jin, the way he opened up to him so different from their first meeting.
It only shows how strong his love for Jin is and it's so beautiful.

The ending with both of them being handcuff well attached to each other again was just hilarious.
You really made my day with this ♥

And of course let's hope that Koki won't kill anybody which I don't thinks so and that Tegoshi will get back to his work.

Thanks again ^_^

nerd_san March 19 2009, 22:37:01 UTC

Twice? I would have died halfway through. *Too long* xD I can't help it though, lol, a lot was supposed to happen. Yes, deja vu is right~ (I used some of Jin's same lines from the beginning too LMAO) excpet this time Jin cuffs himself to Kame instead lol.

Well, I don't think Kame really remembers Jin (or at least the things they did) but said it more out of instinct. Er, more on that next chapter :D lol. Well, it HAS to end in handcuffs. (Decided that in the beginning lmao)

Thank you! We'll see what happens with Tegoshi and Ryoda soon ♥

blue_eye1 March 19 2009, 22:49:57 UTC

I'm a fast reader so it is not a problem ^^
There's no chance I would die from too long reading of your work. It could be twice longer and still would be good ^_^

Maybe an instinct but it doesn't change the fact that Kame felt comfortable and some how familiar with Jin unlike the first time they've met.
It would be nice if Kame could remember only good times they've shared but I don't think there is a chance to that.

So me waiting what author will write :)

nerd_san March 20 2009, 00:00:59 UTC

Eh, really? Well if I liked the fic I'd demand more >:( LMAO. But I haven't read anything in ages -_-;; *Can't read and write or I'll get too lazy to do the latter*

Yes, much better than his first thoughts of Jin the first time they met, lol. Ah, at least his heart is telling him that it's Jin.

Hahahahaha, as to what Kame will remember and what he won't, you'll see in the next chapter and the epilouge.

Although I think the epilogue is just going to be tying the loose ends with awkward humor xDD

mesu87foxchan March 19 2009, 21:57:02 UTC

ahhhhh... love u for this update!!!

u hooked me up damn deep with this fiction!!!!

love it to the core... n yoshaaaa at Akame back in trak with less angst!!!!

love it.. that what i want to say... lol

thanks million
^_^

nerd_san March 19 2009, 22:34:14 UTC

xD Thank you. Yeah they're back with no angst, well maybe if Kame can fully remember Jin then it'll be all good, but I'm not THAAAAAAT nice xDDDD You're welcome! Thank you for reading! :3

kawaiikame March 19 2009, 21:59:40 UTC

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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the cuteness is come back again :3
I MISS IT XD
omg i love this chapter *__*
it's amazing and my fav ~

nerd_san March 19 2009, 22:33:19 UTC

LMAO! Yes, they're back to the start now, lol. Thank you! Glad you liked it :3 yay, lol. One more chapter =)

kawaiikame March 20 2009, 13:29:20 UTC

eh? >O<
is that mean it will end after the next chapter ? mouuu it's seems like yesterday i started reading it <3 I will sooooooooo miss it
but I hope i wont be waiting for long until you update a new fic =)

nerd_san March 20 2009, 17:30:47 UTC

Yes, it'll end after this chapter (finally!) lol. I'll finish my other fics and then write another one, hahahaha >:) I already have the title and plot xD

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3agroob March 19 2009, 23:04:33 UTC

lool that was a funny reaction... i so liked it since it was ALL ABOUT jin and kame...

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nerd_san March 19 2009, 23:53:44 UTC

Yeah, this chapter was purely Akame. OMG *just realized* LOL! Oh well, I guess they are the primary pairing after all :D Oh I never thought of that D:! lol.

It would have been fun, although then I'd have to make it like another kajillion chapters of Jin having to deal with Kame working for him without remembering him xDDD!

Well, at the moment the two are going to jail for the crash xDD! Will the maddness ever stop...xDD