One slight twitch on the bus scene - it cuts from V/D walking toward Logan to Logan, and he is seen very briefly before cutting to Duncan nodding and V/D walking away - seems too quick, so maybe it's just a few frames that snuck in there?
Great job though. I still love the lamp and the Veronica turns, and you switched the scene in the hotel hallway to start on Veronica, too, which is great because it cuts from her at home to her again. =)
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One slight twitch on the bus scene - it cuts from V/D walking toward Logan to Logan, and he is seen very briefly before cutting to Duncan nodding and V/D walking away - seems too quick, so maybe it's just a few frames that snuck in there?
Great job though. I still love the lamp and the Veronica turns, and you switched the scene in the hotel hallway to start on Veronica, too, which is great because it cuts from her at home to her again. =)
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