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[neonafterglow]

I had to write this a long time ago for my creative writing class, but I thought I'd just post it to see what everyone thinks. Looking back on this it seems a little cheesy, but I still like the driving force behind it, if you will. Yayness.

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[sidetracked]

I don't think it's cheesy at all! I've really, really missed reading your writing! I thought it was all completely gorgeous and I love the way you opened up on the marking with fingerprints and the way you carried it through the whole story in her attempt to mark him. To leave her imprint on him.

It was awesome. I'm so glad you're back.