Comments | neon_genocidal: Veronica Mars Season Four: 4.02

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Veronica Mars Season Four: 4.02 - Cliff Hangar

Aug 23, 2007 17:47

It's been a long time coming. It's rough. It's far from polished. But I just need to get it out there and get the ball rolling. I'm determined to finish the season. I promise you that.

So, read, dissect, enjoy. There will be lots to criticise I'm sure, but keep it constructive and make me happy, haha.

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penny_lane_42 August 23 2007, 21:43:59 UTC

Great episode--well worth waiting for. You definitely have the tone of the show down--I especially like the snark, of course. Casting Summer Glau as Wallace's girlfriend was an inspired bit of casting, and I like that you can write a kinder, gentler Dick who's still...well, Dick. I can't wait to see just who it is that's breaking into Cliff's hanger, and just what it is that's got Logan shot at. But my favorite is your characterization of Veronica--she does tend to run away from her problems when she can't solve them, and Logan's never been very solvable.

You're right. This episode isn't as polished as the first one was. But it's still better than 99% of the fanfiction out there. Can't wait for the next one!

afrocurl August 23 2007, 21:45:54 UTC

I'm so happy to see this up again. I know that you weren't quite happy with it (and I did find some typos, but they're hard to recreate when moving from PDF to typing), but i like the way you're setting up this S4.

The tension between Charlie and Dick was interesting, and really meaningful in light of what you did with Big Dick.

I hope you have an easier time with the next episode.

rosesnrubies August 24 2007, 14:30:52 UTC

I'm still reading, but I just wanted to say that I love the transition from the opening scenes to the credits, Veronica's patent denial of, "I'm fine, he's fine, everyone's fine." Good stuff!

rosesnrubies August 24 2007, 14:54:12 UTC

Also, A+ on the suspenseful ending! Can't wait for the next one!

fanofaddie August 24 2007, 15:34:22 UTC

Me very happy right now . NEW CHAPTER -love it love it .The end with LoVe was (L)(L) so cute .More cute moments in the next episode PLEASE

Fantastic! anonymous August 25 2007, 14:07:54 UTC

This was well worth the wait! Keep it up. Just a quick question, i imagine Broadly as a male Veronica, attitude and personality wise, and see them having a brief attraction, is any of this true? Broadly being a male veronica and them getting together briefly?

Re: Fantastic! neon_genocidal September 3 2007, 02:19:31 UTC

Broadley, to me, is a really interesting character - one that's gonna really develop over the course of the season. As for a Veroadley romance, my lips are sealed.