Comments | neon_genocidal: Veronica Mars Season Four: The Season Premiere

neon_genocidal

Veronica Mars Season Four: The Season Premiere

Jun 29, 2007 19:24

Here it is. Episode one, season four, Be It Ever So Humble. My promise to you, as I write this season, is to write the best I can whilst striving to maintain the wit, the humour, the drama, the noir and the snark the original series produced. I hope to improve with every episode I write, but the only way I can do that, is with feedback and ( Read more... )

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Comments 15

woo hoo anonymous June 29 2007, 20:31:58 UTC

Long live season 4. But no previews? They're my favorite part of the show!

anonymous June 30 2007, 09:53:52 UTC

Awesome job, the changes you made were a huge difference. I really liked the Alicia scene, and I am sooo excited for episode 2. Its almost like my show is back!! when can we expect the next installment??

anonymous July 2 2007, 00:10:28 UTC

OMG. I love it seriously! Can't wait for another episode. =D.

marshmallows08 July 3 2007, 13:34:12 UTC

Great job! My ♥ broke when VM was not picked up for another season. But your virtual season 4 is just as good as having another season, maybe even better! Hope you can update soon!

anonymous July 3 2007, 17:41:26 UTC

I read this over at TWOP and in some of the comments they were mentioning Azura was out of place... but when i read it, i don't think you even introduced her. Anyways, awesome like TV worthy awesome because I think you had everyone's characterization spot on and I had no problems whats so ever with the Piz/V break-up, I'm probably bias caz of my LoVe for L/V. :D INCREDIBLE so far!

neon_genocidal July 4 2007, 11:15:18 UTC

A lot of the comments on TWOP were about an early draft of the script, so a lot of changes were made. Originally Azura was introduced in this episode, and Piz was nastier.

Thanks for the great comments :)

anonymous July 5 2007, 23:47:32 UTC

do you have the original draft that I could read?