Fic: Vespertine

Mar 19, 2010 02:47

Behind the tattoos and piercing, and those deep, dark eyes there was a magic to Nico.  Something pure, that made Luke want to believe in love at first sight; that all those bedtime stories his mother used to tell him when he was younger were completely true, that fairies and pillywigs could have whispered in his ears and told bawdy jokes if he had ( Read more... )

percy jackson and the olympians, prose

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thrace_adams March 19 2010, 04:59:54 UTC
Still haven't read the book or seen the movie, but your writing is so good. I could picture everything in my head. That one line..about Luke's smile imprinting itself...oh wow. that was gorgeous. And then My Kingdom, My Rules...loved that too.

Great story!

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neon_footprint March 19 2010, 14:38:28 UTC
Thank you, darling, I am always overwhelmed that you read out of fandom for me :) This is a very minor pairing, kind of a secret love of mine, so I'm really pleased that I pulled off a functioning story from them!

By the way, my icon is Luke!

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thrace_adams March 20 2010, 00:57:11 UTC
Aww, you're welcome. You're writing is so good, I'm always transported :)

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neon_footprint March 19 2010, 14:40:22 UTC
Oh, you ♥

I am so overwhelmingly pleased that you liked where this went. Especially when the tense, the setting and the pairing had all changed from your beautiful opening.

Only for Nico, but then without doubt, yes.

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neon_footprint March 19 2010, 23:05:31 UTC
Our masterpiece. You don't give yourself nearly enough credit.

Hey, Luke needs love too :)

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crowson75 March 19 2010, 19:38:36 UTC
Sensual, warm and utterly beautiful. I even went and watched the trailer for the film in tribute. You're a bit special you are.

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neon_footprint March 19 2010, 22:04:28 UTC
Thank you, dearest. I love your feedback, so glad this worked. It was a little bit important to me, you know? :)

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crowson75 March 19 2010, 22:59:48 UTC
I got that impression. :) xx

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neon_footprint March 19 2010, 23:07:24 UTC
You know too much.

I can't wait until we share a time zone again.

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