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neolithicdream

Haunted 2/3

Jan 15, 2014 20:43

Title: Secret Santa fic for Majincammy: Haunted 2/3 
Author: Neolithicdream  
Pairing/Character: Calzona 
Rating: PG-13 
Summary: For Majincammy, who gave an amazing prompt even if it terrified the living daylights out of me to write. "A christmas-y fanfic where Arizona is greeted by. Mark's ghost in a dream and shown how her life would be crap ( Read more... )

art:fanfic, fanfic:callie/arizona

Comments 15

majincammy January 16 2014, 00:18:19 UTC

Holy crap this is a really good story. I knew something was gonna happen to Arizona cause of how ill she'd been. I hope someone finds her asap!

The story is really getting better. I really like how Mark is interacting with Arizona's past and weaving it into the conversation. I really can't wait for the big finish!

Thank you so much again!

neolithicdream January 16 2014, 00:47:43 UTC

Arizona will be fine! Glad you're enjoying it so far.

Plan is that the Present will be fairly short allowing for a Dismal future ( let's just say I may be going OTT with the misery :-D ) and then back to real present when Arizona has to decide what she's going to do.

That's the plan but....plan has changed so many times :-(

There might even have to be a very short epilogue

ext_1614268 January 16 2014, 00:58:38 UTC

More! I love this story! It's awesome. Any chance we can get the final chapter soon?

neolithicdream January 16 2014, 01:03:07 UTC

Well there's a chance..... :-(

Glad you're enjoying it, believe me , no one will be happier to see final chapter posted than me....even though its fun to write :-D

Thanks for reading and commenting.

nyladreams January 16 2014, 02:13:54 UTC

Another wonderful installment!
Yes, Murphy, you should quit the program and go far far away (lol... sorry, not sorry). I certainly hope she's not the one that finds Arizona - take a hint and stay away (unless tending to a patient).
OKAY - didn't expect to get all ranty... lol, sorry!
I chuckled at Tim and Mark's little bet - of course Tim would nail that one. And with the Future to still go through, me thinks stubborn Arizona is going to have to be knocked in the head by a (toilet?) to get with her truth that she can not and would never leave her family.

This is so great! I hope part 3 is not too far off. :)

neolithicdream January 16 2014, 02:34:06 UTC

Firstly thank you! Glad you're enjoying it.

All I can promise is that I will post part 3 ( at some point), hopefully soon. it's all written in my head - all 66 versions!

Unfortunately ( for you) I like Leah so she will appear but I promise she won't find Arizona but as things stand she will be kind of pivotal ( you might even like my version of her at end).

(There may be a third party to the bet also :-), FYI )

nyladreams January 16 2014, 03:18:51 UTC

I will GLADLY read all 66 versions. :)

Full disclosure: I care not for any of the "interns" - of course, Leah going off (in canon) about going after Arizona to take what is hers (or something like that) did not help her in my "tolerate" department, lol.

Whenever you update, keep up the good work. And thanks for sharing your story. :)

calzonafan999 January 16 2014, 16:43:39 UTC

I liked the part where Arizona wanted to help herself that was lying on the floor, and Mark, told her someone else would help her. Really enjoying this, and can't wait for the next part.

neolithicdream January 16 2014, 16:49:35 UTC

Thank you!

Im having fun writing it, possibly too much fun - hence 12,400 words and we've just trundled into the Present.

hopefully will have it up soon(ish)

captstarbuck January 18 2014, 01:08:21 UTC

Captain "Tardy" present and accounted for.

Fabulous story as per your usual. I can't wait for the next chapter, and I, too, will gladly read all 66 versions. LOL.

I love this, and although I hate waiting for each part, it's always well worth the wait. I think I may have to go back and re-read both parts again (probably the 4th or 5th time).

Great job!

neolithicdream January 18 2014, 12:46:36 UTC

If you are Captain Tardy what does that make me? Mid January has come and gone and I'm still writing the Secret Santa fic ( we won't mention my Hallowen story, ok? :-) )

Glad you're still enjoying it, the Present is proving hard to write as Ax will simply be eavesdropping on convos mostly about her, the future is grim...no ones happy!!!!

So on to Chapter 3

captstarbuck January 18 2014, 14:59:42 UTC

"So on to Chapter 3"

Yay! I'll use your chapter 3 as my own reward for getting the next chapter of my fanfic completed. No more reading for me until I get it done. LOL