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[neocloud9]

Title: "Unrequited"
Series: Black Butler
Genre: Drama, General
Characters/Pairings: Claude/Alois, Hannah, Luka
Rating: PG
Word Count: 333
Summary: A strange little family takes a trip to the beach.
Notes: Takes place in crescent_moony's "Bicentennial" series, before Hitches and Knots.
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Comments

[12gatsunohime]

NO YOU DON'T SHUT UP.

I just...wow. This was really...fitting, this snapshot kind of story that says a whole lot about them without needing to go into too much detail. Also, TRANCY BROTHER TICKLE FIGHT SO CUUUUTE. *3*

Ah, so bittersweetly adorable, are the Trancys. *love~*

[kokorochizu]

This is really amazing and well-written! I just adore this pairing to death along with SebaCiel! <3

I don't think your skills at writing the Trancys suck at all! You did a very good job writing them~

[mukku_fan]

...you may have the ability to push my undecided feelings for Alois over into Like. Maybe. Because that was adorable.

"I'll assume you also know that I don't intend to allow to break that little one's heart ever again, yes?" Um, I think there needs to be a "you" between "allow" and "to."

[neocloud9]

Ah, thank you! That's what I get for transcribing a fic from my notebook to the internet... XD;;

[mukku_fan]

Okay, I'm dumb and replied to the wrong thread here. XD What I meant to say was:

Well, I typed 99% of "Priceless" on my iPod in the span of about fifteen minutes before I went to work. It's a wonder I got away without many mistakes myself. XD

[neocloud9]

After you've stared at a sentence long enough, you stop seeing the words. o_o;;

[crescent_moony]

...I don't really know what to say without spoiling future chapters of "Hitches and Knots," so I suppose I'll just say this:

♥ ♥ ♥

C:

[neocloud9]

Was it okay? Did I stray too far from your characterizations? Did I contradict anything? :U

[crescent_moony]

It was a well-written, lovely fic. As for characterization and contradictions, that will depend on your interpretations of later events, I suppose. :3

[neocloud9]

*crosses fingers for a happy ending*

EVERYONE DESERVES A HAPPY ENDING IN BICENTENNIAL, RIGHT? ;3;

[kagome_angel]

Bittersweet and lovely, and it didn't suck at all.

<3333

AND I TOTES AGREE WITH YOU. EVERYONE IN BICENTENNIAL VERSE NEEDS A HAPPY ENDING. YES, SO EVERYTHING IS BEAUTIFUL AND NOTHING HURTS.