Comments | neocloud9: Another fic, so soon?

neocloud9

Another fic, so soon?

May 15, 2011 15:53

Title: "Industrial Inertia"
Series: Black Butler
Genre: Drama, General
Characters/Pairings: OC, drive-by SebaCiel
Rating: PG-13 (for language)
Word Count: 1,175
Summary: The current head of Funtom Toy Company has been encountering some difficulties.
Notes: Takes place in crescent_moony's Bicentennial series. Spoilers for the end of season two.
To Read: ( This was the seventh red light she'd hit in as many miles. )

bicentennial gets its own tag now, fanfiction, fandom: kuroshitsuji

Comments 9

lizzie8d May 15 2011, 21:16:46 UTC

D'aaaw! This was cute and pretty hilarious. xD Wonderfully-written as well, of course~ I love your fic to bits, bb.

amanuensis1 May 15 2011, 22:40:22 UTC

That's hilarious. Anjali is the kind of woman I admire! Ciel, you're naughty for teasing her. :D

Everyone Together Now: crescent_moony May 16 2011, 00:25:09 UTC

D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW~ :'D

This was ALL SORTS OF ADORABLE. I just. I don't even-- ♥ Okay, one: Anjali Elizabeth Kadar = Canon. YES. I HAVE THAT POWER. Two, I SAW WHAT YOU DID THERE. (You should slap a My Little Pony tag on this post, too. XD) Three, PFFFFFFFFFFFT, CIEL. YOU WOULD DO THAT. X3 Little dick... ♥ Four, OMG THAT ENDING SO CUTE JUST ASDFGHJKL~ *IRL derpy smile*

This made me feel ALL SORTS of happy. :'D Thank you so much, love! This was just perfect! *does lurid thanky jig*

Re: Everyone Together Now: neocloud9 May 16 2011, 00:39:04 UTC

OH, THANK GOD. I was like... Too much world-building? Am I overstepping my boundaries? Will she be like: "Hannah, OMG, get your own fanfic if you wanna write vague Soma/Lizzie references"? I'm so glad you liked it, sooob. I've actually been worrying about it all day. :'D

Re: Everyone Together Now: crescent_moony May 16 2011, 01:14:46 UTC

Lawlz, I wouldn't call that reference "vauge." XD But I like Soma/Lizzie well enough, and I'm always interested to hear what ideas you guys have. :3

Re: Everyone Together Now: neocloud9 May 16 2011, 01:17:14 UTC

Well, I was about to say it could have been any Elizabeth, but then I realized that I'd specifically mentioned Mama Middleford, so yeah. Not too vague, haha. XD;;

mukku_fan May 16 2011, 02:41:41 UTC

Aww, that was so cute! Loved the MLP reference, too. No joke, I laughed. So. Hard.

That is so something Ciel would do, too. Poor Anjali... XD

12gatsunohime May 16 2011, 07:33:33 UTC

Okay. One, I read this on my ipod at a gay club. Those are my priorities.

Two, Soma/Lizzie is something I never considered, but I love it. It would work so well, oh my god.

Three, Ponies. I lol'd for real in the middle of blacklights and Rihanna.

Four, I adore this story. Anjali is really cool, with her determination and unwillingness to back down. And Ciel is just dead freakin' perfect, very demonic, but well-mannered and so very, very Ciel. Also, the Arthur Conan Doyle bit cracked me up. And then the ending, oh my god, so sweet, I can't even...I just...I love this so much.

neocloud9 May 16 2011, 12:29:14 UTC

...Wow, that's immensely flattering. XD;;

Really? Haha, it occurred to me a while back, after I realized those two really were the only true "innocents" in this series. Also, they're just kind of adorable every time they're in the same scene together. I could imagine them finding comfort in one another after Ciel's "death." Now THAT'S a fic that someone needs to make happen.

PONIES. I COULD NOT RESIST.

Aww, thanks so much! It makes me so happy to know you and Moony liked this, it was way more experimental than I'm usually comfortable with, so I was really, really, REALLY nervous about posting it. XD;;