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Neo Tokyo High [Ch.2/x]

May 02, 2010 12:09

Title: Neo Tokyo High
Author: neo_vizualism
Band(s): the GazettE (more to come)
Pairing(s): AoixUruha (more to come)
Rating: PG+
Warning(s): MalexMale
Synopsis: Shiroyama Yuu, the most un-accepted student at Neo Tokyo High. He's quiet, shy, sensitive and friends with the most unpopular girl at school. If his school life wasn't already screwed enough, he's impossibly ( Read more... )

neo tokyo high ch.2

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neo_vizualism May 4 2010, 23:00:13 UTC

Really!!? :D
YAY! I was worried about this chapter. I'm soso glad you liked it. I'll put up the 3rd chapter as soon as I can, but that may take a while due to the fact that school is beginning to take up my free time.

lashy337 May 5 2010, 03:37:05 UTC

Hey~ Just found this fic, but I'm enjoying it so far! I usually don't like OCs, but yours seem to fit in the story very well. I like how you've done their characters as well, I can really visualize it, doesn't seem strained at all.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

neo_vizualism May 5 2010, 03:56:23 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it. And I'm relieved that you're okay with Taeko. I don't really like using OC's that much. But I needed one for my fic and I'm really enjoying using her. Thank you so much for reading. I'll post Ch. 3 as soon as I can. But that my prove difficult. School is beginning to take my free time.

lashy337 May 6 2010, 22:37:47 UTC

As much of a pleasure to me as it is to you; the internet is swarming with horrible OC fiction! xD

I totally understand, I'm about to explode as well. Good luck, I'll be looking forward to it~

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neo_vizualism May 5 2010, 14:49:07 UTC

That's what I'm going for. A lot of people do the whole popular kid is a snob thing. So I wanted to change that. Isn't Uruha the sweetest. ^-^

konicoffee May 5 2010, 06:38:39 UTC

Cool! Ruki's quite the bold one, isn't he? XD

neo_vizualism May 5 2010, 14:49:43 UTC

He is. ^-^
He's quiet, but he's straightforward and bold when he feels the need to talk.

lifeisnyaa May 5 2010, 15:59:31 UTC

You're doing really great with this fic! :D I'm actually reading this one as you go along. I normally read fics when they're completely done. But I couldn't wait for this. XDDDD;; Next one asap please! :D

neo_vizualism May 5 2010, 19:28:42 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'll try to post the next chapter as soon as I can. But school is beginning to steal my freetime.