FIC: Book Seven (4/?)

[nenyaentwhistle]

Series: Book Seven
Title: Vow Spoken
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: HP/SS with other mild possibilities
Word Count: 2,927
Betas: Lesameschelle
Disclaimer: I don't own Harry Potter and am making no profit.
Summary: Post-HBP. Everything has fallen apart and Harry doesn't know what to do. Dumbledore says to trust Snape, but how can he?

Comments

[anmkosk]

Yep, well worth it :) Very intriguing, can't wait to read more...

[nenyaentwhistle]

thanks :) but no one seems to be reading it so I don't know if I'll keep it up. I felt guilty since so many people seemed to be reading it.

[anmkosk]

Hey, don't give up! There's always most reviews at the beginning and in the end, many people just read the first chapter and then wait until it's finished to read it all in one go... and many others read but don't review. Getting just a few reviews doesn't mean there aren't more people looking forward to updates... and we who *do* review would love them just as much :) Would be a pity to see this left unfinished, impressive writing this far.

[nenyaentwhistle]

it's pretty much an excuse, the no reviewing gives me to quit. i think i'm pretty much done with the HP fandom, though I had some really great ideas for this fic. we'll see.

actually people (w/ my stories) respond to the first chapter and i don't see them even at the end. it's kinda sad :) tells me they don't wanna stick around. and it's really hard for me to write right now, my eyes are just giving me real problems.

[hambares]

I think Harry may be convinced now. I am looking forward to more.

[hambares]

please let jkr be convinced....please let the 7th book ACTUALLY include this scene!

[nenyaentwhistle]

Hmm will see, but dropping from 25 reviewers to 4 is :(

*hugs*

[sly_fuck]

yay! update! i love you!
*blush*
*cough*
yeah anyway ...
great job...want more...more soon?
Thanx
*hugs*

Re: *hugs*

[nenyaentwhistle]

maybe, i dunno. no one seems to be reading :(.

Re: *hugs*

[sly_fuck]

so i'm nobody now?
no one seems to be reading
i think i'm offended ;) they'll come around and if you don't mind being pimped i'll pass it along to some friends?

Re: *hugs*

[nenyaentwhistle]

you're somebody. authors are the artist type and we're temperamental and needy and omg yeah :). i mean XD ever been around a lot of writers? it's pathetic at workshop.

i want to cry. my story gets workshopped this week. time to get torn apart!

[queenrissa]

Wow, this is coming along nicely, I can't wait to see where you go next. I hope that the lack of reviews doesn't prevent you from continuing, I'm sure people are reading it, just not posting.

[nenyaentwhistle]

hopefully :). i do have ideas for this, it's just gives me a little death each time i finish a chapter. it's just that hard to write.

[leelee_potter]

Hiya! *waves*

I wanted to read back before I started the new chapter to make sure i was upon them all, but couldn't figure out how to get to them. *pouts* What am I doing wrong?

That aside, I like the whole fawkes/vow thingie Albus did with Severus proving him to be protecting Harry. Not that Harry sounds convinced, but we'll see. :) looking forward to more.

Lee~

[nenyaentwhistle]

Oh you're not friended probably. Well I friended you :).

So you can go back and read now. But I think the story's pretty easy to follow. Glad you're liking it XD. I took liberal license w/ Fawkes.

[leelee_potter]

You're right, it is easy to follow, but with any story, I like to check the last paragraph of the previous chapter before I start a new one, just to get myself back in the right mindset. Since I couldn't find the first few, I thought i'd not started the story, but once I got to the part about the pensive, it all clicked together.

[nenyaentwhistle]

Heh, don't you love the pensieve scenes? I was stuck on them for the longest time, just trying to think of the best scenes. The next chapter is even harder to write *facefaults*