Cynic

[nemoasphyxia]

There's no life to your living

Comments

[returnaddress]

I'll say something with more depth after I read it a few more times and can actually form a coherent thought/comment/thing.
For now, I just wanted to say congrats on the writing. It's been in your screen name for quite a while, so I figured it must be something of a pet project that you had to take your time with.
So yes; well done on getting it all writ.

[porcelaintine]

I like it. It's different from what I've seen of your stuff and yet so very you.

"So close your eyes and say it's bliss//'cause you sold your soul for this"

I love that line. It just flows. Can't wait to hear this with vocal/instrumental backup.

[returnaddress]

Kay. So here's the more coherent commentary I can piece together

[nemoasphyxia]

I'm workin on those last lines anyway, but actually the last two lines refer to the outside opinion, that of the cynic, because a cynic doesn't have to lie.