Ficlet: The Sinner In me (Jared/Jensen) 1/1

[nemo_88]

Title: The Sinner In Me
Author: nemo_88, but you can call me Nemo
Fandom: SPN RPS
Pairing/Character: Jensen 2nd person POV. Jared/Jensen
Word Count: ~5700
Rating: PG-13?
Warnings: RPS (Real Person Slash) if that’s not your thing. Religious themes - read A/N. Angst!
Disclaimer: I do not know Jensen or Jared. I certainly don’t own them. This is a complete

Comments

[timdvosk]

I liked it. I usually don't go for the Religous fic's, but I read your's (cause it's yours, LoL) and I liked it, really good. You wrote it good, and the whole struggle thing with Jensen is good, nice for the whole church thing too. I liked it, is pretty much what I mean, LoL!

[nemo_88]

Aww, you read it cause it's mine? Thank you Tim, I flattered! :D I'm glad you liked it even though it had religious themes. :)

[vanee]

BB you posted it. YAY. ♥ I hope people will enjoy this as much as I did!

[nemo_88]

Thanks, babe! ♥

[maladroitoracle]

Beautiful, absolutely beautiful! I really liked the slow pace of the fic, and Jensen realising what he would lose if kept denying his feelings!

[nemo_88]

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked the pace :)

[eilan]

That was really well done, I enjoyed it thoroughly!

[nemo_88]

Thank you! :D

[itsthedetails]

Oh wow, I really loved this. You wrote Jensen's inner struggle so well. I could really feel how torn he was. Jared's patience is so sweet and the perfect thing to get Jensen to open up a bit and think about other possiblities.

I really like the end too, how Jensen hasn't necessarily changed his mind for good, but is willing to try. The idea of them going into church side by side with a variety of different people is such a nice image to end with.

Aewsome job.

BTW: I've friended you. I love your writing and I want to keep up. Hope that's okay.

[nemo_88]

Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm really glad you could feel Jen's struggle and that you were pleased with the ending. This fic was more about Jensen coming to terms with himself than the boys getting together and having the buttsex. :P

Friend away! I'm always open to new friends. Let me know if you want me to friend you back. It' mostly my rl posts that are locked (I'm not a very interesting person *lol*)

[itsthedetails]

Let me know if you want me to friend you back.

It's totally up to you. If you want to take a spin in my journal and see what's there I'm always glad to have another person on the flist. It's mostly SPN stuff, I still occasionally post VM stuff, and then there's the other random TV stuff and some RL ramblings.

[nemo_88]

I'll add you then. :) I used to be in the VM fandom so those posts won't scare me away. :P I'm just happy to have more SPN fans on my flist. :)