Ficlet: And I Will Never Be Sorry For Knowing What You Taste Like (Jared/Jensen RPS)

[nemo_88]

I know, I should be finishing the padildo!verse, but this was something that popped up in my head and wouldn't let me go. :P It's a stand-alone and I'm just pleased I was able to finish something for once. *lol*

Title: And I Will Never Be Sorry For Knowing What You Taste Like
Author: nemo_88, but you can call me Nemo
Fandom: SPN RPS
Pairing/Character:

Comments

[tehuberfangirl]

-flails- Padackles owns me seriously

[nemo_88]

Hee, me too xD

[mss_celestal]

Aww, great job!! Wasn't sure the story was gonna have a happy ending with all the angst, but you pulled it off!

Loved it! Fantabulous job!!

[nemo_88]

Hee, this is probably the happiest ending I've ever written xD Yeah, I love my angst :P

I'm glad you liked! Thanks for commenting! :D

[mss_celestal]

Thanks for writing it!

[allyoops]

I really enjoyed this, Just the right amount of angst and sweetness, yay! And a happy ending! Happy endings are key! :D!

I hope that's not out of place to say, but this could benefit from a line-by-line beta. I tripped over a fair few small errors, including one larger one where the POV seems to switch from Jared to Jensen. :/

[nemo_88]

Thanks, I'm glad you like!

No worries, I'm just glad when people can give me con crit. I have a beta, but she can't catch all of my mistakes of course, she's only human. I'm not a native speaker so I'm fairly certain there's tons of errors still. :/

If you could point out the place where the POV switches (if you remember it and if it's not too much to ask) I'd be very grateful :)

[allyoops]

Reposted due to html spoodge!

Well I think you did a great job, regardless! <3

And I hope I didn't come across as criticizing you or your beta! *headdesk* I did not mean that. Meep! I just tend to think the more the merrier, at least when it comes to catching the tiny things. They hide out in the text and them ambush you later (true story!).

That’s why it surprises him when the goofiest picture of him and Jared from the CW’s Winter Press tour ends up on the cover of some tabloid he rather not touch,

It should be him and Jensen since your POV focus is Jared. Also, since it's in the same sentence: he'd rather not touch.

*is still basking in happy Jensen&Jared* :D

[nemo_88]

And I hope I didn't come across as criticizing you or your beta!
Not at all! I'm just very protective of her as you can understand. :) Usually I work with two betas to be able to catch more errors (being Swedish, I know I make a lot of stupid ones) but I've recently started writing rps and my usual betas are not in this fandom. Yet... xD

It should be him and Jensen since your POV focus is Jared. Also, since it's in the same sentence: he'd rather not touch.
Thank you! You're so right about that. (Why do the boys have to have similar names? :P) I'll go change it right away. Thank you so much for taking the time and poiting it out! :)

[tattoo_kink]

He throws his arm over Jensen’s shoulder, like old times, proudly announcing, “Everyone, this dork right here, is Jensen, my boyfriend.”

Yeah! If there're any justice in this world THIS would be true...

Love it... and now I'm looking forward to reading a new chapter of the 'padildo-verse' *happydance*

[nemo_88]

If there're any justice in this world THIS would be true...
Oh yeah. *lol* Glad you like! There will be more padildo stuff soon, I hope, if I can only get my muse into gear :P

[seaoflosttime]

this was perfect. just the right pace.

you've done an excellent job depicting the tension between them then the stress of being outed.

the scene one before last, at Jared doorstep, nearly broke my heart..

Overall, really beautiful and sweet.

[nemo_88]

Thank you so much for the sweet comment! I'm glad you felt the pace and the tension. Those were two things I tried to get accross. :)