HMD FOR THE ZOMBIEPRIME.

[nemesisnova]

Ok, we all know the drill.

Concrit is love. Even more love is if you think that I am doing something wrong, and you explain to me why you think that. If you think that I am doing it right, then let me know. Basically, I like feedback. I like to discuss it as well.  Nemesis Prime is an inherently powerful pup, and in thewake_rp , he'll only grow more so as

Comments

[anonymous]

First, let us be clear: English is not my native language, I apologize in turn for wrong word orders.

I do enjoy stalking him when I have the time. Nottheless, there are things that I have noticed. Please, understand that I mean no offense, however:

Please re-read the canon. You are doing an alright job, but, you could be better.

A simply tweak of word order, triple checking the spelling and grammar. Make sure that what you wish to impart is clear. There are no misinterpretations that could affect how he, and by extension, you, come across. I believe that you will only improve.

I think you for the clean, simply lay out of the scheme colors.

[nemesisnova]

It's ok anon.

Thanks for the tips. I'll keep them in mind, and yea, a re-read is in progress now.

Glad you like the layout. :)