Stolen Heart

[nemesia23]

Title: Stolen Heart
Author: nemesia23
Pairing: Asami and Takaba
Fandom: Viewfinder
Disclaimer: Characters belong to the mangaka, YAMANE Ayano.
Warnings: Drama/OCC-ness/Unbeta'ed 
A/N: A short drabble. I was inspired to write something about losing someone they deeply cared about. And it clicked, I felt the scenario of Asami losing Akihito should never

Comments

[radcat38]

Well, Asami will now be on the hunt...in short time he will have his life..may have to pay a price for hurting him...but once Asami set his sights on something he does not let up until he gets it.
Can stand alone or can be nice companion to the piece someone writes to make a happy ending.
Nice.

[nemesia23]

Breakups are hard, and the lessons it brings to people is good no matter how painful it is to experience. Yeah, I can see Asami not quitting on his lover. And I kinda think its so obvious that he won't stop until he gets his Akihito back to his side. Thank you for reading my story & commenting. I do hope someone writes a companion fic to this drabble of mine because like I stated, I too love a happy ending as well just like everyone. ^^_,)

[nbsiren]

^^ Good story~ I vote for a happy ending! but that's me :) I like happy endings...real life has enough suck for everything else lol.

[nemesia23]

Thank you. I vote the same for a happy ending, but can't write a good one at the moment. Yup, real life can be a bitch at times, good thing we have fan fictions for our enjoyment to read, xd!^^

[crimson_elf90]

aww :'( Whilst reading I was hoping to see a little scene at the end with them reunited, Akihito coming to Asami and forgiving him. It didnt quite happen like that, but hey, i'm a sucker for a happy ending, obviously not the point of this fic but then right at the end a glimmer of hope :D lovely.

And might i say, haha! a self-pitying Asami XD dont see that everyday, but if he cheated on Akihito and Akihito (somehow) got away from Asami then he deserves it >:( hurting like Aki, he'll have fan girls after him (but not in a good way!)

Just thinking, my cat chases foxes lol XD does that mean Akihito's going to chase Asami?? hehe, ignore me, im just playing.

[nemesia23]

A glimmer of hope is something instead of having none. I'm with you, I like happy endings too. Unfortunately, can't write a good happy ending now. Maybe someday when I feel more inspired to write those kind of stories again, I will. Sorry, there isn't a happy ending at the end. Well, that's life, sometimes you don't always get your happy ending...

Yeah, I can't see a self pitying Asami, but he is still human no matter his cold front. Anyone would be hurt if someone they love is no longer in their lives.

Thank you for reading and the lovely reply you left here.

[immorta_beloved]

Oh, this was so beautiful, and so sad...I love this kind of stories, and you described Asami's pain wonderfully :-) I find it difficult to describe Asami's emotions, since I fear to put him OOC... He seems so "unreadable" xD but you did a wonderful job in this Drabble :-) loved it :-)

I think this does not need an happy ending, since you left a hint of hope in the last sentences, a hope that Asami will bring his Akihito back by his side :-)

Good job :-) I hope to read more from you ^_^

[nemesia23]

Thank you for reading. It was hard to write Asami in OOC, but he isn't exempted to pain. I somehow see it happening, him and Akihito parting ways since they have so many things against them. Not only that, but Asami have been with others too and there's always temptation around the corner. If Asami hurt his Akihito then he deserved everything he is feeling in my opinion. But, hopefully his heartbreak will be remedied of he did everything in his power to win his love back. I believe in the power of determination. It can bring miracles too. :)

Thanks again, hope I can write more for you guys too, soon!^^

[ameris57]

interesting story. Enjoyed it. See forward to the next.Big kisses and hugs.

[nemesia23]

Thank you. I'm glad you've enjoyed reading my drabble. Hugs & kisses to you too. XD! :)