ok ok this is so beautiful i swear. yamada being so romantic and all. the surprises omg idek i bet yamada is more than this with chinen in reality fml and chinen easily getting jealous of daiki and yuto sdfhgh
i love this i love thisssss i hope you'd write more
Mh, mi scuso se il commento non è in inglese, ma il mio cervello non ce la può fare OTL. Non posso purtroppo darti un giudizio sulla forma inglese (per cui sono fondamentalmente inutile XD) ho notato solo una cosa che è sicuramente una svista qui: I was feeling the luckiest person on heart dove hai messo heart al posto di Earth.
Venendo alla storia innanzitutto, sappi che ho kyaiato da morire *o* sono proprio dolci e coccolosi e mi ci voleva davvero tanto in questi giorni, credimi.
Confesso che solo per un attimo, un attimo solamente eh, i miei #feelings Ariyama hanno preso il sopravvento, ma poi mi sono imposta di tornare in Yamachii mode XD Ryosuke è proprio una zoccola, insomma XD E Chinen ha un modo ultrafine di dirglielo XD
Mi ha fatto ridere molto questo pezzo qui: “It’s just for work, Yuri. If I would have wanted to get closer to him I would have done it years ago, don’t you think?” He got closer poking my nose still smiling
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I seriously wanted to cry because of chinen asdfghjkl this was so sweet ;A; the date, aaaaah RYOSUKE YOU GO DUDE a fic well waited for, it was awesome, really and so are you ;; <3 thank you for sharing it~ *sobs*
I just found out this one-shot when I am really so deprived over YamaChii fanfics lately. And it was great to read this one-shot of yours and then bam-- It was like this one-shot had filled all the misery- the deprivation. Now I can sleep peacefully~ I had a heavy doze of YamaChii :3 This was honestly written beautifully. I could even feel how much they love each other especially those efforts that Yamada had exerted. I mean, I never thought he would really be there. And I never thought that the point why he really made Chinen to go out from their house. You made it so good I wanna cry in happiness. Especially that bell part and connected red ribbons~ this was honestly beyond perfect I couldn't say more. Everything was unexpected. So surprising
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ok ok this is so beautiful i swear. yamada being so romantic and all. the surprises omg idek i bet yamada is more than this with chinen in reality fml and chinen easily getting jealous of daiki and yuto sdfhgh
i love this i love thisssss
i hope you'd write more
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Non posso purtroppo darti un giudizio sulla forma inglese (per cui sono fondamentalmente inutile XD) ho notato solo una cosa che è sicuramente una svista qui: I was feeling the luckiest person on heart dove hai messo heart al posto di Earth.
Venendo alla storia innanzitutto, sappi che ho kyaiato da morire *o* sono proprio dolci e coccolosi e mi ci voleva davvero tanto in questi giorni, credimi.
Confesso che solo per un attimo, un attimo solamente eh, i miei #feelings Ariyama hanno preso il sopravvento, ma poi mi sono imposta di tornare in Yamachii mode XD
Ryosuke è proprio una zoccola, insomma XD E Chinen ha un modo ultrafine di dirglielo XD
Mi ha fatto ridere molto questo pezzo qui: “It’s just for work, Yuri. If I would have wanted to get closer to him I would have done it years ago, don’t you think?” He got closer poking my nose still smiling ( ... )
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I seriously wanted to cry because of chinen asdfghjkl this was so sweet ;A; the date, aaaaah RYOSUKE YOU GO DUDE
a fic well waited for, it was awesome, really
and so are you ;; <3 thank you for sharing it~
*sobs*
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