Okay, I've been mulling over how to go about this for a while now. I've decided I just need to be blunt. Your portrayal of Reimu is incredibly shallow, and most of the time it feels more like you're playing a caricature of the character rather than Reimu herself. You exaggerate her canon behaviors to ridiculous degrees, and honestly it feels like you're relying on fanon more than canon for your characterization. A couple of examples to illustrate what I mean:
This log. Why in the world would Reimu attack the rabbits and birds? They're not youkai animals that might be able to tell her something about the incident, they're not shooting at her--they're doing nothing. I know Reimu tends to just fly around and shoot at people until someone tells her something relevant, but that's the thing--she shoots at people, not anything that moves. Was that kind of behavior supposed to be a joke of some kind? Because to be quite honest, that's the only reason I could see for exaggerating Reimu's canon behavior to such a degree.
Hmm, I thought I was using less Fanon then canon, though that was back when I first had the muse. I admit I was doing a little much with the money. Though that 1 entry almost had me screaming for me to have her request donations. You are right though, Donations here would be stupid. I wasn't going to include donations into the post at first, but added them at the end
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This log. Why in the world would Reimu attack the rabbits and birds? They're not youkai animals that might be able to tell her something about the incident, they're not shooting at her--they're doing nothing. I know Reimu tends to just fly around and shoot at people until someone tells her something relevant, but that's the thing--she shoots at people, not anything that moves. Was that kind of behavior supposed to be a joke of some kind? Because to be quite honest, that's the only reason I could see for exaggerating Reimu's canon behavior to such a degree.
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