Comments | neko_no_baka: Paranoia 7

neko_no_baka

Paranoia 7

Feb 07, 2007 12:04

Chapter One: here
Chapter Two: here
Chapter Three: here
Chapter Four: here
Chapter Five: here
Chapter Six: here

( Paranoia Seven )

paranoia, writing

Comments 7

zebra_bunny February 9 2007, 16:30:43 UTC

Ooh! It's really good. I was so busy I hadn't read anything since chapter one! I really like it. I noticed a few typos. I should have written them down, but it was so good, I didn't want to stop to write them down.

neko_no_baka February 12 2007, 02:51:34 UTC

heh, typos. As more successful writers have told me, "That's what editors are for." With spelling, I'm fond of phonetic spelling, as well that my Mom learned the American spelling, so I grew up with both Canadian and American spelling.
Most typos are because my brain gets ahead of my fingers, or something of the like. Once again, that's what editors are for.

Glad you like though! Have you caught up then?

zebra_bunny February 12 2007, 02:54:34 UTC

Yay editors! Except they sometimes miss stuff too. Teehee

I understand about the brain getting ahead of the typing. I think there was one where your fingers might have been on the wrong keys, but I don't remember. I figured out what you meant anyways.

Yep, all caught up! Can't wait till 8! :)

cinnamon_digory February 10 2007, 03:15:52 UTC

hey, which chapter of Paranoia did I want to read again?

neko_no_baka February 12 2007, 02:44:00 UTC

actually... chapter 8, which I'm currently typing up, I think...

cinnamon_digory February 14 2007, 02:36:56 UTC

okay, thank you

(I want to read the chapter with the description of the roomies)

bookish_nerd February 17 2007, 17:44:04 UTC

I like that we get to see Paranoia's sense of humour in this chapter, and I love the irony of the fact that they put the face of one of the leaders of the resistance movement on TV without knowing it, at a protest that he didn't even mean to be at! Look forward to reading more.