Non-challenge (Could Have Been)

[nekare]

I want cold damnit! I'm wearing sleevless shirts in november, and I'm sick of it. Where art thou o amazing cold? (even a bit of breeze would be appreciated, geez.)

Author: nekare
Title: Could Have Been
Raiting: PG
Character: Karasuma
Word Count: 330
Summary: Miho wonders what could have been.
Written because I'm bored and itching to write, although I'm

Comments

[zurizip]

...
I love you SO much right now.

only two changes "Sakaki's hands leaving imprints *on her bare stomach"
(in/on seems to be one of your few difficulties.)
and "reassur*ing words from Amon" - alternatively - "words of reassurance from Amon"

And you used that style that someone... northlight I think, does that I adore so but rarely write.
I should really try it some time.
PS- finger got blister and then felt better! yay!

[nekare]

Ugh, I never get the prepositions right! (not even in spanish, and that's rather pathetic.) Thanks for the tip *goes to change*

Glad you liked it and that your finger feels better! (I love your icon btw, it's so glompable. If that's possible.)