Break Us Apart, Bring Us Together [Doctor Who, Martha/Ten, R]

[nekare]

I ditched my last two classes because I'm still sick sick sick. I'm out of kleenex so I have a roll of toilet paper at my right and a growing pile of snotty tissues on my left. Ugh. At least I don't have a fever anymore, though

Comments

[neadods]

Plotwise, I wonder why he wouldn't take a lift from his other selves, but I'll ignore that for brilliant lines like "she shagged something that was only human-shaped" and “I understand you, in any case, and I know you have commitment issues and you’re still mourning and you’re slightly insane.”

[nekare]

Lol, yeah, I wondered about that too, and then I said to myself 'wait a minute, this is Who! Why am I worrying about logic!' and decided my brain was too filled with snot to try and think of an alternative. so. *cough* *sneezes*

Thanks, though, that second sentence is quite dear to me. :)

[gindiaries]

Obviously, he couldn't grab a lift, because he has the envelope from Sally telling him what happened and he can't mess with the timelines! He knows the TARDIS has to come and get him, because the events at Wester-Drumlins have to happen to make sure that the silent assassins are stopped.

[malaleen]

Oh, this was very nice. I can completely see this happening during that time they were stuck in 1969.

I enjoyed reading this a lot, and really hope you write more Ten/Martha fics.

[nekare]

Thank you so much!

[laura_luvage]

I love this. Superbly written and great story.

[nekare]

Thank you so much!

[persiflage_1]

This is good !

I particularly liked:

The meetings have been brief and awkward, and for all that the Doctor in the suit may be the eldest, he still gets scolded like a child for having dared lose the TARDIS.

which is particularly apt after just watching "Time Crash" with Ten and Five, and yes, Five scolding Ten like a naughty child !

[nekare]

Hehe, yeah, I giggled a lot at that XD

Thank you!

[nonelvis]

Oh, my god, this was wonderful. I am a sucker for "stuck in 1969" stories anyway, but you captured their characters so perfectly, especially the bit about the Doctor saying sex with him was "messy" but continuing to sleep with Martha.

[nekare]

Hee, I'm such a sucker for 1969 fics as well. :) Thank you!