Five Times Bella Swan Kissed the Wrong Guy [Twilight, Jacob/Bella, Bella/Others]

Aug 13, 2007 20:01

My apologies, people. I wrote Twilight fic. And even worse, I wrote Jacob/Bella and Bella/A Bunch of Other People fic that's likely to offend half of the fandom. Huh. Good thing I've never cared about that stuff, right? XD Anyway, I wrote this all in one sitting, and I swear, I'd never written something this long in this short a time. o_O But I ( Read more... )

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aetherae August 14 2007, 01:34:46 UTC
That was really good. ♥ It's always fun to explore the possibilities in writing. I think you did these quite nicely. ;]

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nekare August 21 2007, 19:05:39 UTC
Aw, thanks a lot. :)

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nekare August 21 2007, 19:07:54 UTC
Eeeh, thanks so much. :)

I simply adore five things fics, and I saw a challenge or something in one of the communities and immediatly thought of this, haha.

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tokyoghoststory August 14 2007, 01:37:05 UTC
It’s you that kisses Jacob this time, and when he says about fucking time against your lips you laugh and press harder against him.

it was all about that line.

great work gal :)

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nekare August 21 2007, 19:19:36 UTC
Aw, thanks, I very much liked that line too and it's nice to see it worked. :)

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undefinedwishes August 14 2007, 01:43:54 UTC
ahhh this was awesome. The Jacob kisses slayed me in the very best way XD

Brilliant job!

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nekare August 21 2007, 19:20:14 UTC
Haha, my Jacob love flared the brightest while I was writing that, lol.

Thank you! :)

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kaiwynn August 14 2007, 01:53:30 UTC
Oh, it was so beautiful! I'm amazed at how well-written this is and how it draws me in...

The Emmett one was my favorite, though. :D

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nekare August 27 2007, 19:18:55 UTC
Thank you! Hehe, I giggled a lot at the Emmett one too XD

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