Comments | negolith2: Stargate Atlantis A/U Fic: Untamed, Ch. 29

negolith2

Stargate Atlantis A/U Fic: Untamed, Ch. 29

Jan 26, 2008 13:15

Category: Suspense/Supernatural/Alternate Universe
Characters: John, and well, everybody
Length: ~ 83,000
Rating: R (for language, violence, and future torture)
Diclaimer: Don't own them, not for profit, blah blah blah copyright cakes

Summary: Project Atlantis is a top secret think tank located off the coast of British Columbia. Acastus Kolya, the ( Read more... )

stargate fanfic

Comments 14

kriadydragon January 26 2008, 22:07:52 UTC

Of course a pixie wouldn't be too pleased about being called Tinkerbell. I wonder if you kiss did something to John? Maybe heal him or speed the healing up? Just speculating.

negolith2 January 26 2008, 22:17:57 UTC

Nice speculation, but naw. :)

In Kim Harrison's books, the favorite pixie epithet is "Tink's panties". They all see her as a sell-out.

nati_a January 27 2008, 00:12:10 UTC

JENKS! Yes, he does use Tink & Disney in almost all of his expletives.

Loving this fic, love furry John, love all the prince John attention he keeps ducking from.

I just about went nuts last night checking every half hour for updates. I'm addicted! Keep up the good work

negolith2 January 27 2008, 00:28:25 UTC

Why, thanks!!

Yes, Jenks - he's awesome. Loved when he was human sized, had to touch everything.... :)

Going to be drawing (or attempting to) the first meeting between John and Eira when I'm finished with this story. Which, at the rate I'm going, will be tonight. :)

ranlynn January 27 2008, 01:00:46 UTC

Eira nodded and walked back down his torso until she came to Katie’s waiting hand and hopped up. As she was being lifted back to Katie’s shoulder John couldn’t contain himself any longer. “Did you really pix Ronon in the eyes?” Keller had mentioned something about it earlier today.

Eira tossed her hair back as she stepped onto Katie’s shoulder. “Yes. The ogre needs to learn better manners.” Then she was ducking back behind a fall of red hair and hidden from view.

Katie grinned at John. “She’s pixed a few of my botanists, too. They never learn.”

John chuffed again. There were two rules when dealing with pixies - never call them Tinkerbell, and never mess with their gardens.

ah...Toot would be proud.

I take it no-one's brought up the 'ogre' thing with Ronon yet. Can hardly wait. ;)

Glad to finnaly see John on the mend. And you hit the right tone with the Woolsey & Jack. Jack was 'Jack' and Woolsey...well he *is* such a bureaucrat but he's a pretty decent guy in his own way.

negolith2 January 27 2008, 01:12:57 UTC

Hmm, I'll be having John bring them honey in the next chapter. Maybe it should be a pizza....

Oh, the ogre thing will be brought up. Just wait.

Woolsey needs a few shots of tequila and a full body massage. That guy really needs to loosen up. I wonder - when he farts, do dogs in the area go crazy?

Harrison, Hamilton, Butcher... oh my! nati_a January 27 2008, 01:43:49 UTC

Ah, but they're pixies not lesser faeries :) Dunno if Pizza Xpress delivers that far out :D Sure seems that we all read the same bookS!

Re: Harrison, Hamilton, Butcher... oh my! negolith2 January 27 2008, 03:02:29 UTC

I suddenly have this image of John and Ronon and Lorne all sitting in the greenhouse with a couple of pizzas and beer....

And I really do with Hamilton would go back to plots. I gave up after Obsidian Butterfly.

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aelfgyfu_mead January 27 2008, 02:00:49 UTC

I'm glad John's on the mend, and I'm not surprised about Jack's reactions at all.

I was, however, surprised and happy to see Katie, apparently now friend of the pixies! Makes sense!

Oh, Carson--I didn't think he'd let Chaya go so long! I had hoped that once Lorne had control, he'd get her out of the body bag.

I do like that Woolsey's uptight, but he's not the bad guy, and he's not an idiot.

Caldwell would make a good head of security.

negolith2 January 27 2008, 03:00:20 UTC

Botanists and pixies - cut from the same mold! :)

Yeah, Carson - I see the first 48 hours after the showdown in the greenhouse are insane, and with surgery for John and Lorne and getting Elizabeth taken care of, almost 3 days pass before it's discovered that Chaya is still alive. And by then, Carson is probably unconscious himself.

Had to work Col. Skinner, er, Caldwell in somehow. :)

aelfgyfu_mead January 27 2008, 19:44:38 UTC

Yeah, Mitch Pileggi is great!

negolith2 January 27 2008, 19:49:07 UTC

Yup! Col. Skinner!!! I've often wondered if he was a boxer every time I see his nose....

And there's going to be a new X-Files movie. He better be in it, since they killed off the Lone Gunmen.