White Collar Fic: Safety Net

Nov 02, 2011 19:51

Safety Net
Rating: PG (whump)
Characters: Neal, Peter, Elizabeth, Mozzie, June
Summary: Sometimes friends can get you into trouble, but the important thing is that in the end they're there to pick you back up.
A/N: Written for vesperwhisper, for collarcorner's ficswap. Hope I've managed to make you a cuppa what you like! :3 Thanks to imbecamiel for the encouragement and beta'ing.

The Fic! )

fandom: white collar, fanfic

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neontiger55 November 3 2011, 18:47:41 UTC
I really liked this! Great action and tension at the start, and perfect h/c. Loved the banter here especially, you write them very well ;)

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nefhiriel November 3 2011, 23:05:33 UTC
Thank you! :D I was pretty happy with the way the action turned out (for a change--I usually hate doing action sequences). I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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nefhiriel November 6 2011, 03:18:21 UTC
:D Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed the story! It was fun to work on this for you (especially since so many of the things you like to read are things I like to write). ;)

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scarvenartist November 5 2011, 15:36:26 UTC
DUDE you write an intense chase scene. *fangirls you* That opening was fantastic--so tense, so fast-paced, yet so detailed too that I could imagine all of it. LOVE. I honestly don't know how you do it. (Really, your writing just keeps reaching new heights of awesome.)

And the conversation between Mozzie and Neal afterwards is hilarious. ("Death couch" - *sporfles*) Altogether, bringing the whole "family" into it at the end...so much sweetness, it's the perfect balance of H/C. *loves it*

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nefhiriel November 6 2011, 03:38:06 UTC
*blushy* I'm so glad you liked the action sequence. Because action is definitely not what I consider my forte! Usually, that's what gets me all hung up. But I was surprised by how much fun I had with the opening scene. :D

Mozzie his hysterical to write dialogue for. *bg*

Thanks, mellon-nin. *squish-hug* (And--eee! Just saw you sent us moar to read, too! *happydance*)

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micheleeeex November 5 2011, 23:46:43 UTC
I loved this :DD

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nefhiriel November 6 2011, 03:04:05 UTC
Thanks--I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :D

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ivorysilk November 6 2011, 23:23:01 UTC
Loved this!

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nefhiriel November 7 2011, 20:00:16 UTC
Thank you! ;D

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