White Collar Fic: Identity Crisis

Oct 28, 2011 12:23

Identity Crisis

Rating: PG-13 - broken bones, and a generally hurted Neal

Characters: Peter, Neal

Summary: It really wasn't Neal's fault. Really.

A/N: Written for kriadydragon's prompt on collarcorner. I haven't written 2k words this fast in forever. Terrifically ambiguous-yet-angsty idea you had there. \o/ And a big thanks to imbecamiel for the quick beta'ing work.

The Fic )

fandom: white collar, fanfiction, genre: promptfill

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kanarek13 October 28 2011, 17:42:38 UTC
This was exactly what I needed :D Thank you! Of course, the image of Neal's head tucked under Peter's chin is my new love of the day, possibly the weekend :D Excellent!

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nefhiriel October 29 2011, 14:54:22 UTC
"Of course, the image of Neal's head tucked under Peter's chin is my new love of the day, possibly the weekend :D"

Aw, thank you! :3 I'm always afraid of making these accident!hug scenarios too syrupy. XD Glad you liked it.

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cairistiona7 October 28 2011, 19:10:09 UTC
I'm sorry, but I can't leave a comment because of severe meltage brought on by this:

"But apparently Neal didn't care one way or the other at the moment that his head was tucked underneath Peter's chin as he listed forward in an unconcerned slump, for all the world like an exhausted toddler collapsed after too much fun on the playground."

Come back later after solidification has progressed to the point where fluency and coherency is once again possible.

Thank you and have a nice day.

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nefhiriel October 29 2011, 15:00:20 UTC
LOL. Yay for meltage! I always question adding in Le Accidental!Hug, but the scene really felt like it needed one, so I chanced the sappiness. ;3 I'm so happy that you liked it.

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ultracape October 28 2011, 19:29:52 UTC
This was so good. I loved the part about the crustacian, or was it primates. Very Neal and very Peter.

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nefhiriel October 29 2011, 15:01:10 UTC
LOL, thanks! Gotta love concussed!Neal, eh? ;D

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kriadydragon October 28 2011, 21:35:11 UTC
Awww! Loved this! Thank you so much, it's exactly what I wanted :D

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nefhiriel October 29 2011, 15:01:54 UTC
Yays! If you liked it, then mission accomplished. :3

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sholio October 28 2011, 21:38:55 UTC
Oh, that was very sweet. I really enjoyed it. :)

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nefhiriel October 29 2011, 15:02:40 UTC
Thank you so much! \o/

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