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xaipw June 1 2008, 05:13:04 UTC
An excellent take on the AMTDI genre. Hot! But at the same time you really captured John's angst (and Rodney's too).

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neevebrody June 1 2008, 18:20:50 UTC
Thank you very much for your comment. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story.

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beeej June 1 2008, 05:45:11 UTC
I love AMTDI stories! And this was really hot! :D

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neevebrody June 1 2008, 18:21:41 UTC
Well, I'm certainly glad you enjoyed this one. Thank you!

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berlinghoff79 June 1 2008, 08:22:25 UTC
EEEEEEEEE! You posted!

I love the 'sappy' ending. Awesome! And hot!!

Oh, and the AWMTDI(aliens who made them do it) finally have a name \o/

*glomps*

I hope you had at least 14h of sleep.*squishes*

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neevebrody June 1 2008, 18:25:02 UTC
Well not entirely 14 hours... but I'm so glad you like the ending. And yes, I hate naming the aliens/natives. I've said it before, but it bears repeating - your art was fabulous and there would have been no story without it. *snuggles* You can be my artword partner any time! (and of course, the honor would be all mine)

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tarlanx June 1 2008, 08:29:34 UTC
That was wonderful - so sweet and angsty at the same time :-)

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neevebrody June 1 2008, 18:26:07 UTC
Thank you! I had a lovely art prompt but I didn't feel like making it come easy for them. Glad you approve.

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lysambre June 1 2008, 08:32:32 UTC
Angsty with a nice ending, my favorite type of stories !

Thanks for sharing :)

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neevebrody June 1 2008, 18:27:29 UTC
Thank you! I felt they needed a little dose of angst, but decided this time to give them a happy ending. Glad you enjoyed it.

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