New Fic: The Amazing Technicolor Celebratory Punch of Indara - McShep (NC-17)

[neevebrody]

This was originally written as a fluffy piece for the Intoxication challenge at

Comments

[girly_curl_3]

Mmm! Loved this!

Especially: ...loopier than a sack of squirrels... Ahaha!

And the possibility of a "this." ♥

[neevebrody]

Thank you sweetie! I had a lot of fun writing it until it started to take on a life of its own. But I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

[entropy_maximum]

I loved this! and drunk!John is so cute!

[neevebrody]

Thank you! I tried to write drunk!John as irresistible to Rodney - even though frustrating! So glad you liked it.

[unaccompanied_g]

I loved this! "I think we can make it. Besides, Ronon knows I will leave him where he falls if he does not."
TEYLA! &hearts And drunken John is so adorable. :)

[neevebrody]

Thank you! Yes, I love a strong Teyla who has no patience with the boys. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story.

[hull1984]

Yeah? Well brace yourself, you're going to see fucking adorable if you don't help me out here

Loved that line, it's pure Rodney ;)

Drunken John was hilarious, I could hear him saying those things and it was just so spot on.

A wonderfully entertaining, hot read. Thank you.

(oops, edited due to coding madness :)

[neevebrody]

Thanks, hon. I had a lot of fun writing this - until I ran away with me. I love an adorable, frustrated Rodney! I'm so happy you enjoyed it.

[quasar273]

Very nice. Even though it was a bummer for Rodney, I'm glad they didn't have sex when John was drunk. Great story!

[neevebrody]

Thank you! Yes, poor frustrated Rodney, how I love to fluster him. This was a lot of fun to write until it started to grow and then I got frustrated, but I'm really glad you enjoyed it.