Lyric Wheel Contribution

[neeree]

This wasn’t the response he had hoped for. There was no way he could actually kill his subordinate and only companion in this place, even if he annoyed him. Frowning he ordered the other, “Look at me.”

Slowly the eyelashes fluttered open and watering eyes looked at the boy, showing a mix of emotions. Fear, submission, admiration….and even love.

Comments

[linear_flower]

*squees* You got my lyrics! XD

And yay I love Reborn/Lambo! OMG great story! ^o^

A/N: I know this might not really fit he song. But the song was seriously pissing me off anyway. Because I couldn't get what the meaning was >:O I mean no offense to the person who picked it, it's a catchy song but after listening to it for a week straight you start to get pissed.
Finally I had to get help from different people to sorta understand it...u_u

I'M SO SO SORRY! I didn't think these lyrics would be so hard! If it helps any, I had the same problem with mine.

[neeree]

I got it at the end XD

And yeah, no worries, I think EVERYONE had problems with theirs <3

and....I just wanna ask *fidget* did you get it was them before the end?

[linear_flower]

and....I just wanna ask *fidget* did you get it was them before the end?

Hmm? What do you mean? I'm so sorry.

[neeree]

Did you realize that it was Lambo and Reborn before I said their names?

[carefreeless]

Rebo/Lam is my guilty pleasure.
And um. I love this. <3

[neeree]

THANK YOU~

They are sooo cute. I actually like writing Lambo crying. Though it depressed me <3

[asaphira_sachi]

MOE~ Great to see another RL fic out there x3 ♥ This was so beautifully written, especially the recaps of the past to reinforce their relationship. ♥ The angst ;o; But... kinda inevidable when it comes to these two. ^^; I can see both endings happening, though yes the original feels more in-line with the fic. :D

[neeree]

Thats what I thought too. Since the original was the one I planned to have anyway. Just when I was writing the ending I was feeling pretty happy and somehow it started going fluffy. So instead of scrapping the fluff I just stuck in an alt!ending for fun.

[izelmecatl]

Wow...that was intense! i really like Reborn/Lambo, but you made me love it! Is it a little bit sick if i liked the original better? :D Although the other one was great! Keep up the good work, hopefully you'll write more abaout these two?

[neeree]

I agree that the original one is better. XD

Too much fluff is bad for you. it gives you a sweet tooth!! XD

And I donno about writing more Reborn/Lambo stuff....it was kinda hard. But now I'm all hyped up and wanna just write anything. So more KHR fics are bound to come XD

[izelmecatl]

Yesss! XDD Will be waiting patiently, cuz you're a great writer!

[neeree]

thanks <3
encouragement like your works miracles on my (very slow) writing skills.

[chibikakei]

i read it XDD <33 i loved both of the endings, though i think the happier one might have been more believable if reborn kinda insulted lambo in the same sentence before telling him his worth (wow, that sounded really mean, 'telling him his worth' XD;)

WONDERFUL IMAGERY~! i could imagine everything that was going on and when the story ended, i was kinda surprised because all the images stopped and i saw words again x3

The boy scuffed at the submissive response he received. Stalking closer he loomed over the older male. Pressing the gun barrel gently to the cow’s face he used it to tip the older man’s head up and whispered, “Look at me” this i really liked for some reason XD although i got a bit confused and then realized you switched POVs from lmabo to reborn

[neeree]

...I agree, maybe I should make him insult Lambo then....do you have any insults in mind? (my brain refuses to think of this fic anymore so I need help)

THANKS - I was afraid I overdid it on the imagery... but if it works then it works, right? XD

I HAD to switch POVs or the story wouldn't move on. I mean...its only SO interesting witting from the POV of the crying/abused one since its always like "WOE IS ME" and that gets old after a while.

[chibikakei]

knowing reborn, he'd probably tell lambo how messed up his face looks at the moment as in "damn, all that crying made you ugly. but even then, i guess even you're still worth a lot" or something like that =)

[neeree]

TRUEEE~

I never thought of that *goes to change it*