The Wrong Choice

[needjakenow]

Title: The Wrong Choice
Warnings: None
Rating: K
Summary: A poem expressing Jacob's feelings towards Bella's choice

Comments

[willow2883]

Yeah I sound bitter, so what? You betrayed me.
Kissed, fed me lies and goddamn played me.
Gah! This!
The thought of you stone hard and cold leaves me heaving.
You made the wrong choice. We were easy as breathing.
Double gah! Love the last line. That was perfect!

[little_anchors]

Is it weird that the first thought I had after reading this was "dang Bella, you just got served!"

[tunde_tre]

That leaves me frustrated as hell, possibly the way you felt after writing it cos it's freakin' true! Heart-wrenching ending to it, too! Great work