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needjakenow

I Can't Live Without You

Sep 21, 2011 15:56

Title: I Can't Live Without You
Warnings: Character Death
Rating: K
Summary: AU Eclipse. The scene after the battle in Eclipse. Jacob is hurt and Bella gets there just in time to tell him how she feels.

( I looked around frantically at each of them, waiting for one of them to save the day. )

jacob/bella, angst, fanfiction, completed, charlie/bella, one-shot

Comments 3

review nikkib1973 September 22 2011, 07:55:04 UTC

Hiya. Sob! I was crying all the way through this. Poor Jake and Bella. The end was what really got to me, poor Charlie! Even though it was so sad I really thought this was a great story. I did not realise Bella had taken her own life right until the end.
Well done. Nikki.

willsherun September 23 2011, 17:48:18 UTC

Jacob wouldn't have wanted her to kill herself. Selfish as usual.

That being said, I would've done the same thing.

willow2883 September 25 2011, 08:13:53 UTC

Wow! Can you say 'tragedy'? At first I thought Charlie was reading Jake's obituary, then I assumed Bella had run back to Eddie when Jake died (Bella's gotta have a man, you know). But I was surprised when I read Bella commited suicide.
Someone was in a dark mood, bb. Too many BD trailers? LOL
Well done, though!