Excerpt: "In Dreams" ¤Kamina, Simon ¤ R ¤ Mentions of blood

[necchan]

I was going somewhere with this, before Simon freaked and got all morbid. Not that he wasn't supposed to, mind you. But it shouldn't have happened this early in the narration. I'm a bit baffled as to how I'm supposed to steer this back towards the original direction - dreams in a loop, entwined with reality in such a way that they crush Simon as

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[necchan]

*timidly* Hot? Truly? I was hoping to get something like that, I think. Something rather... sensuous (*coughs*if not downrihgt sensual *coughs*), but I wasn't sure I'd managed. XD

As I mentioned, the fic sunk into a morbid atmosphere much sooner than intended, and it threw me a bit off-guard, so I can't judge the piece unbiasedly (as if an author ever could! *laughs*)

XD That's exactly my point! *LOL* No matter the fandom, I always end up entangled in not-quite-brotherly-thus-not-incestuous relationships!!! It's scary! XD

[necchan]

Uh, I think I should take a moment to say that with "sensuous" and "sensual" I mean something "related to the senses", "empirical", etc. So NOT something sexual. XD;;;;