[Gemini Festival] "Smoke and Mirrors" Prologue and Act 1 - R/NC-17 (fanfic)

[necchan]

I  haven't finished to write this fic *yet*... I hope I'll be able to finish it, and post it all before the Gemini Festival comes to an end *crosses fingers*. If not, I *promise* to finish it ASAP, anyway, after the Festival's finished. *determined*

Title: “Smoke and Mirrors”.
            Author: Nemesi.
            Fandom: Saint Seiya.

Comments

[lunarsilverfox]

Ooooh, I love it! You've got me wanting to read more and more now too. ^^

[necchan]

Thank you!
I'm really glad to hear you're liking the fic so far, and want to read more! ♥ I truly hope you'll like the next chapters just as much! :D

[ghaidin]

very sweet, the part about Aioros' touch being able to soothe Saga's headache.

[necchan]

^_________^
Thank you for your comment!
maybe I shouldn't tell, but that detail is quite important, as we'll see in chapters to come! ;)

[bakatashi]

Very, very nice and sweet /as always ^_^/. I'm waiting more you know ^_^.

[necchan]

-^^-
I love it (and to write it), when Aiolos and Saga are so sweet, together...! XD
thanks for your comment! I'm glad you're liking the fic so far, and I hope that you'll like the next chapters, too! ♥♥♥

[bakatashi]

You welcome ^_^. I like very much how you tell the story /everything that I read was tuching my feelings/. I become more your fan with every fic of yours ^_^.
I'm waiting next chapter with impatience.
Have a nice day ^_^.

I will get around to reading this soon....

[mattisune]

Just need to do some other things first, but it does look good. And now that it is summer and I'm out of college until fall I'll get back to playing with that mpreg story. ^_^

Re: I will get around to reading this soon....

[necchan]

You know how much I look forward to that mpreg! :D
I'm glad you may have time to work on it! ♥
And thanks for your comment! I hope that in the end you'll find the fic to be as good as it looked at first-glance! ^_-

[cirdan_havens]

At first I wondered how I'd missed all these wonderful things. I actually went back in my LJ to find out. Then I discovered it was because I was preparing for my trip for Italy. In fact, I left on the day you posted this. It would've made for great reading material on the plane.

Aww, poor tormented Saga. You write him really well. There's sometimes the danger of having his angst trivialized because everyone angsts these days. You do it without him seeming childish, adding such lines as "half-ashamed of his neediness." It enables him to be weak and know that he is only this way with Aiolos. I'm very envious of him. You ended with a most appropriate line. It's true that such nightmares can't easily be defeated, sometimes for an entire lifetime, I think, but having such a sweet lover and just plain having a distraction helps with temporary relief.

[necchan]

Woah... It feels odd to answer for last to the first comment you left me on this story. Doesn't it? X>;;
Well, by now you know how grateful I am for all your reviews, and how gratifying it feels to have a reader so attuned with my story! ^^/
I am glad you are liking each chapter. ♥♥♥
Thanks again!
Neme

[cirdan_havens]

Whatever order is fine. :) But btw, don't feel obliged to reply to each of my comments. I do it for the author/artist as a way of showing how grateful I am for the work. And yeah, maybe also so they know how I'm reading it and know whether or not it is coming across the way they want. Actually, I don't do it often these days so it's been fun for me. Hard when there's not enough material there to really say anything but "I liked it!" Then I feel a little moronic though saying that is still more encouraging than no one saying anything.

[necchan]

I like to reply to each comment I receive. ^^
I really appreciate it, when people take the time to comment my work - wheter they liked it or not, they let me know their opinion, gave me their counsel and expressed their point of view. I like to show my appreciation by answering each comment, when I can. :D
Sometimes it's hard to find the time (for example, I haven't answered *one* comment about Gethsemane, yet ç__ç); or what is hard is to write something longer than "Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!". Of course, it's entirely true - I'm VERY glad when people like my art, appreciate my work, my humor, and so on. I'd just like to say... more; which isn't always possible. (I mean, it's hard to answer comments with just a smiling emoticon in them with many words, no? ;))) )