Great job! I really enjoyed reading these. I like how you use words to convey a lot in very little, the images you’re creating. All characters feel very like themselves :)
Ohhh! What an apt title for these flash-stories! If you blink, if you get distracted even for a microt... they're gone. And yet the feelings linger on, because they are too strong to fade.
Five wonderful pieces, but the first was to me the most powerful in all of its bittersweet taste.
Oh wow, very beautiful. I like how you take inspiration from various separate small scenes :) I love Boundaries the most, because that's such an interesting scene and I think your interpretation is great ^^
Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed them :) Most people seem to like Boundaries the most which pleases me - I think it's a scene that NEEDS an interpretation that isn't "Stark suddenly decides to perv on Aeryn while his true love is dying." So I'm really glad it works.
Conformity was the most fun to write because while it's meant to be canon Macton/Lo'Laan/D'Argo, I think it also reads as AU Nerri/Chi/D'Argo. I love believing that Lo'Laan and Chiana were more alike than different.
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If you blink, if you get distracted even for a microt... they're gone. And yet the feelings linger on, because they are too strong to fade.
Five wonderful pieces, but the first was to me the most powerful in all of its bittersweet taste.
*Outstanding* :)
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Conformity was the most fun to write because while it's meant to be canon Macton/Lo'Laan/D'Argo, I think it also reads as AU Nerri/Chi/D'Argo. I love believing that Lo'Laan and Chiana were more alike than different.
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