Fic: Bluebird

[nebari_rebel]

Title: Bluebird
Word Count: 302
Rated: Mild R for sexual content.
Fandom: Farscape
Setting: Mid to late S2.
Characters/Pairing: Chiana/D'Argo

Comments

[obsessivemuch1]

Beyond beautiful.

Lyrical, dreamy and quite, quite lovely :)

[nebari_rebel]

Thank you! =D =D

[olegscape]

I like this fic. You did good with this style :) And I like the coziness between them, it’s a good moment in their relationship, no strings attached.

[nebari_rebel]

Thank you!

[charlie_bz]

oh! Wonderful!!

first there was this ever so awesome opening:

She settles on his hips, and maps his past with a curious tongue.

Then this:

Sweeter than me?

Yes.

She smiles.

I don't know why I like that last exchange so much.

Great job all around. Lovely language, solid tidbits of backstory...and I loved that the Nebari don't scar. hmmmm...

[nebari_rebel]

Aw, thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it :) I'm happy with how it turned out, especially considering how quickly it was written. I feel on a roll, posting two in one week ;)

I loved that the Nebari don't scar. hmmmm...

I love fanwanking LOL She should have scars from taking the lifedisc out (not to mention having it put in) and the zombie in Eat Me, her face healed much faster than Rygel's in early S4....I find it hard to believe her skin is so flawless whenever we see it. And making something up about Nebari biology is much more satisfying than "they forgot" or "the makeup department doesn't have time".

Thanks again :)

[jsfunction]

Aw, lovely! The whole style of this is so different and interesting, I've never seen what's essentially a sexual scene written like this before. LOVE the 'frell me' -'I am trying' exchange ;D and all the details you mentioned that really happened in the series.

I too like your fanwank. It would explain a lot!

[nebari_rebel]

Thank you so much! I'm happy you enjoyed it :)

The more I think about the Nebari don't scar thing the more I love it, especially with her personality. How much easier is it to act recklessly or pretend you don't hurt if there's never a physical reminder?

[dangermousie]

Wow, this was lyrical, in character, and exactly what I craved.

Thank you!

[nebari_rebel]

Thanks so much! I'm really happy you liked it :)