Thing-a-Thon V--The Perfect Present

[ashley_pitt]

TITLE: The Perfect Present
AUTHOR: Ashley-Pitt
CHARACTERS: Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Donald “Ducky” Mallard
GENRE: Slash
RATING: PG
SUMMARY: Jethro gives Ducky a gift. Submitted for ncis_shared Thing-a-Thon V

Comments

[grey853]

This is really sweet and I like to think of Gibbs being sensitive enough to get Ducky a pup.

One thing though, in the following paragraph, you've got quite instead of quiet. You might want to edit that.

“Actually my dear, I am not. This being the first year without mother…suddenly after the children and the Pattersons had gone the house was just so still and quite. I had to come out here. Mother did so love the moonlight”

[ashley_pitt]

Thank you!

And Thank you... all repaired.

I wish that spell-check could read minds.

*g*

[taylorgibbs]

Oh that was so sweet and touching!