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Prompt #009 - Oh Crap: By Sultan76 Rating NC17

Nov 21, 2010 14:44

( Fic be here )

post: fanfiction, prompt #009, genre: humor, author: sultan76, rating: nc-17

Comments 11

wingstar102 November 21 2010, 07:03:50 UTC

LOL. I feel for Tim. I've caught plenty of people whacking off... everywhere... and it's so damn difficult to not be embarrassed. Fantastic! Maybe a sequel in the works? Will beg and grovel for more!

Love and cherries,
Wingstar

sultan76 November 25 2010, 11:30:05 UTC

LOL! Thanks for your review.....I know, I have walked in the same and it is embarassing for all! Am tossing up(pun intended) on a sequel for Tim! Thanks again.

slash4femme November 21 2010, 20:49:21 UTC

oh Gibbs! oh Tim, this was lovely and hot at the same time.

sultan76 November 25 2010, 11:30:39 UTC

Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed! :D

qzee November 21 2010, 21:42:16 UTC

okay, I can so see Tim needing a shower of his own after seeing naked!Gibbs. A cold shower. Very nicely done, I can virtually feel the awkwardness pouring off of Tim.

sultan76 November 25 2010, 11:31:23 UTC

Oh yes....an icey shower! Thanks so much for the review! Glad you enjoyed!

redvelvetribbon November 22 2010, 05:32:05 UTC

Bwhahaahah! Oh poor...well both of them really. Hot though too. Would you consider a Tim version? Tim after the difficult case going home and for the first time actually getting a chance to think about what he saw and heard? Gibbs was jerking off...and he called out my name???? No...but Im sure...did i imagine that?
Perhaps Gibbs decides to visit Tim at his apartment after the case to apoligise for his abruptness and to check to make sure that Tim isn't too uncomfortable to work with him...and essentially walking in on his 'fantasy lover' in full naked sweaty writhe? Ha. That would blow Gibbs circuits and possibly his self control?
Oh seriously that would be awesome.Please?

sultan76 November 25 2010, 11:41:13 UTC

So pleased you liked it....writers like yourself made me wanna write stories....I love your Never Land fics! Hmmm a sequel for Tim....sounds like a plan, I think I will have to seriously consider this idea! Thanks so much for the review and ideas :D

redvelvetribbon November 26 2010, 02:18:08 UTC

Oh excellent! I think the reality of sweet innocent Tim all sweaty and worked up over Gibbs would be very difficult for Gibbs to ignore.
And thanks by the way. Im glad you liked Never Never! :)

angel_of_dreamz November 25 2010, 19:09:16 UTC

Love, love, love it!

Wow, I vote for a sequel too.

Did I mentioned that I loved it?

sultan76 November 27 2010, 17:38:38 UTC

So please you loved it...thanks for the review. You win....sequel is up now! Hope you enjoy that one too! :D Take care!