Fic: "Darkness Comes, and Goes", PG

[harem_priestess]

Title: Darkness Comes, and Goes
Rating: PG
Genre: angst, first-time
Word Count: 4,313
Summary: Paloma set in motion more than just the beginning of the end of Gibbs biggest secret.
Warning(s): Only spoilers, which I'll cover below.
Spoiler(s): Twisted Sister from S4, and most definitely the last few episodes of S7. Oh definitely.
Disclaimer: Not

Comments

[beautybecks]

I love fanfiction. It's a medium where the characters can talk and feel and it isn't always about action, it's about the other stuff that makes us human, like love. You've really written them well and in a way I see Gibbs more human here than in the show and I really like that. This is so beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

[harem_priestess]

Wow, thank you. See, we're always our worst critics, aren't we?

I personally love Gibbs, and while I know I lot of people have a problem with the "lone-wolf" shit concerning Hernandez and his family, I see it perfectly within character, and that's part of why I wrote this. Of all the characters on the show, I think for me Gibbs IS the most human, with the exception of maybe Ducky; of course, something could be said that these are the two elder members of our beloved dysfunctional family, and have therefore been through a hell of a lot, and have had time to really ruminate about these things.

Of course, I LOVE everybody on the show (I think I may be a rarity in that sense), so, yeah. Anyway, thank you for reading and commenting. It means a lot :)

[jack_infinitude]

Everything beautybecks said. This does not suck. It is beautiful. It's. You are incredibly good at writing these slice of life-esque pieces, and making them beautiful and interesting and hard-hitting.

I really loved this.

[harem_priestess]

Thanks girly :) It means a lot that you loved this, considering how much I love what you write. I'm still unsure about, even after rereading it just now, but thank you.

I think part of the reason I'm so unsure is, like I said, I'm just very all over the place in my head. Which is probably why I like these two so much; they give a girl a good place to really play around with whatever the hell is going on in our heads by going through and trying to decipher whatever the hell is going on in their heads.

I'm just curious if I'll ever be able to write something light and fluffy for these two! It's just hard for me to go there with Gibbs!

Thanks for reading, and for encouraging, and for just generally being very cool. So, even if you only ever get one reply per prompt, keep them coming, I need the inspiration!!

[katiemoose]

I am so glad that you decided to post this story. It feels like a real conversation that Tim and Gibbs could have had. (and I wish they would have on the show!)I really enjoyed reading it and look forward to more of your writing.

[harem_priestess]

Thanks :) I figured I needed some more slightly more objective eyes to see this and give me an opinion. And I'm glad at least a few people have enjoyed it; helps me dump some of the negativity surrounding it.

I look forward to more of my writing too; helps rid myself of demons, as it were :) Thank you again for your words!

[darkdani]

Totally agree with the above comments. I'm really glad u posted this, so we could all read it. I can honestly say it's one of the best, and one of my favourite fics in the NCIS fandom, and pretty near the top of all my fandoms.

I loved that, although it wasn't canon, u stayed true to the characters. They weren't OCC at all, like some Gibbs are in Tim/Gibbs fics. I also love that although it was reasonably fluffy at parts, it wasn't so much that ur thinking 'wow this is fluff', it was subtle and balanced out with the touch of angst. Also the fact that the whole plot was believable really made it for me, although I doubt a gay relationships gonna happen, I always like reading fics where it's plausable, no always 'out there' plots

Also, as Jackson is one of my fave characters, I have to say, I loved ur one =]

Yeh this is like one of the longest reveiws I've made on a fic, so bye bye =]

(Dunno if it came across but I'm so glad u posted =]) x

[harem_priestess]

Wow. Don't know if I can live up to that compliment! But thank you

[sultan76]

Wow this is excellent! I agree with all comments above. Great job! I really enjoyed this :D

[harem_priestess]

Thank you very much :)