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Challenge Fic #5 The Sins of The Father

May 29, 2006 22:35

Title: The Sins of The Father
Author: sharpiesgal
Pairing: Leroy Jethro Gibbs and Donald "Ducky" Mallard
Genre: Slash
Word count: 1329
Summary: It's Memorial Day and Jethro makes his annual pilgrimage to his father's grave where he receives an unexpected surprise.
Spoilers: None that I really know of.
Author's Notes: This is for nakeisha who sent me Gibbs and Ducky ( Read more... )

!creator: sharpiesgal, challenge 05, fiction

Comments 9

toomuchfandom May 30 2006, 06:47:57 UTC

Ow!

*giggles*

Cute:D

periwinkle27 May 30 2006, 07:57:57 UTC

Heck yes, you'd better continue it. It's going to take Nakeisha a long time to convince anyone she's sane. Incidentally, why would she want to be sane? Is she nuts? (If you have to be nuts to want to be sane, where does that leave you?)

Seriously, this was very well written and very moving. Please do more.

nakeisha May 30 2006, 08:17:05 UTC

It's going to take Nakeisha a long time to convince anyone she's sane.

Sure is. But there's sane and sane...

Incidentally, why would she want to be sane? Is she nuts?

Ah, I never said I wanted to be, I'm a firm believer that sanity is overrated; I merely said I needed to convince the men in white coats that I was sane :-)))

(If you have to be nuts to want to be sane, where does that leave you?)

Confused? You will be.

nakeisha May 30 2006, 08:15:26 UTC

Ooh, Chris, this is lovely. So very moving, full of love, so very believable, a great take on the characters, painful, yet happy and peaceful too.

Good old Ducky, he knows his Jethro so very well.

I loved the reference to meeting the kids - so perfect. As was the description of what the kids did.

Lovely.

More, please.

And thank you so much for this. Even if I am still coughing from trying not to choke on the mouthful of peppermint tea I'd just taken when I read your author's note. I love it. You're a star.

::Hugs::

k1mono May 30 2006, 08:36:07 UTC

OOOOO very moving and so in character.
well done Chris

Looking forward to the next part. :))

sharpiesgal May 30 2006, 14:01:08 UTC

Many thanks for the kind reveiws...

I see I have created another monster...sigh

Will work on a sequel this week...I promise...

sharpiesgal June 1 2006, 04:39:37 UTC

Going to clean this one up and post it to the NCIS Archive and ff.net. Must spread the love...sigh