Trust, by Orion

Aug 24, 2005 16:09

Title: Trust
Author: Orion
Category: gen
Rating: G
Spoilers: "SWAK"
Disclaimer: Everything except the words belong to someone else and I don't make any money off this.
Notes: Hm, I don't really know where this came from. Well, I do, but it's complicated. *g* As always, feedback is greatly appreciated.

Trust )

genre: episode tag, writer: juleself, genre: general, challenge: first

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juleself August 24 2005, 22:01:09 UTC
You know, I've watched that scene now maybe a hundred times, but I just don't get tired of it. Gibbs shone throughout the whole episode, but that scene... *hearts*

And hey, thanks for the feedback and glad you liked it.

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nakeisha August 24 2005, 15:17:06 UTC
Phew.

Superbly and intensely moving.

And, IMO, you have Gibbs to a tee here and his feelings.

Well done.

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juleself August 24 2005, 22:16:49 UTC
Thank you. Gibbs is so intriguing to write. *g*

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gibbsgirl August 24 2005, 17:52:54 UTC
Beautifully done!!

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juleself August 24 2005, 22:17:51 UTC
Thank you and glad you liked it. It was a beautiful scene to begin with.

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pixie_on_acid August 24 2005, 20:54:47 UTC
Just excellent. Putting us in Gibbs' head during that scene works perfectly... and that's almost exactly how I saw it myself. I love the way you've captured Gibbs' impatience when he gets worried. Well done.

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juleself August 24 2005, 22:32:28 UTC
Thanks so much. I might try Tony's POV as well, but writing it from Gibbs' side felt a lot more challenging.

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teddibear October 2 2005, 04:00:51 UTC
*wibble* very good character study of what was going thru Gibbs' mind during this scene. Loved it.

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