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The List Maker by Ashleigh Anpilova

Nov 03, 2009 16:48

TITLE: The List Maker
AUTHOR: Ashleigh Anpilova
CHARACTER: Timothy McGee and OMC.
GENRE: Gen
RATING: PG-13
SUMMARY: McGee has never needed the team more.
CHALLENGE 'Think Fast'
WORD COUNT: 1,607
AUTHOR'S NOTE: Written in 40 minutes and then tided up a little afterwards.
DISCLAIMER: I don't own these characters, nor am I making any money from them. ( Read more... )

challenge: think fast, character: other, character: timothy mcgee, writer: nakeisha

Comments 23

desrose November 3 2009, 17:31:28 UTC

Wow... I always knew McGee had strength in him. Sometimes more than the whole team. He's a good agent. A great agent. And you just proved that ten times over in my mind! Great (but still sad) story!

nakeisha November 3 2009, 17:45:36 UTC

He does indeed. And he's a fine agent; he really is.

Thank you very much. I'm so glad this worked for you and showed you that side of Tim.

sharpiesgal November 3 2009, 17:56:22 UTC

WOW!

Timmy is so strong.

I liked the killer's middle name...lol

I see Six's paws in this. Perhaps there is a sequel in the works?

nakeisha November 3 2009, 18:04:49 UTC

Thank you for the WOW - that really makes me happy.

He is; he really is.

Hee. I just might have had you in mind when I used it *g*

Ah, yes, Six had 'fun' with that one. There might be.

Thank you very much indeed.

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nakeisha November 4 2009, 15:19:12 UTC

Thank you very much. I'm glad you also think McGee has this in him.

Thanks for these. *Goes off to correct*

jumpfall November 3 2009, 22:31:19 UTC

Tim! I absolutely love fics where we get to see Tim's inner strength. *g*

He has certainly come a long way since his first days on the team (although I don't doubt that he's always had this in him!) -- and it's lovely to see this shown (and recognized by the team) in a way that reflects nicely on all the rest of the team as well. :)

nakeisha November 4 2009, 15:24:59 UTC

I'm glad you enjoy seeing Tim's inner strength, because we know he has it.

He has indeed and I agree he always had it. After all in the very first meeting with Gibbs he did stand his ground literally and didn't cower away from an angry Gibbs.

I'm glad you liked the way I showed him in this. Thank you for reading.

birggitt November 4 2009, 01:42:10 UTC

Oh, you chilled me here! Seriously chilled.
You totally fooled me at first. I was smiling, as reading, thinking how cute this kid (that I thought it was MCGEE! at first) was, with his list of crayons' colors. I was a little what? when I was reading about the excuses, but then... teenagers...
But here is where you slapped me. Hard. A list of killings?
Oh, noes! McGee is in his hands! *cries*
Your killer was terrifying. That slight cover of logic over such madness *shudders*
Oh, Timmy! I always knew you are strong man, I only wish you shouldn't had need to prove it *cuddles Timmy*
His fate in Gibbs, his incredulity at Tony tears strained voice... So, so him.
Amazing story!

nakeisha November 4 2009, 15:28:01 UTC

*Hands over warm blanket*

Thank you so much for that - I'm really so chuffed it had that effect on you.

Oh, good. I'm glad to hear you were fooled and thought the kid was Tim. And teenagers, yes.

But not killings.

Golly, I'm really so pleased to hear how terrifying you found the murderer. Thank you.

Oh, he is so very strong.

Total unwavering faith.

Thank you so much. I'm really glad you found this so powerful.